I don't have herpes so I'mma listen. lol..

Feeling the beat a whole lot, aight i'mma kill you for not having a chorus. Time for 2nd listen, critique time.

Verse 1-
Your flow's best on this verse. I'm feeling the "past tense" line as well as your adlibs, you didn't overdo it on this track. Lyrics were straight.

Verse 2-
lol @ the mexican line. I like the fact that you use self-glorification through the track, but you say "I" and "I'm" a whole lot... like you can say phrases reflecting yourself without using "I" sometimes.. other than that, your lyrics were pretty straight. Flow was pretty decent.

Delivery and Presence, your presence is as always has been, pretty good. Your delivery is nice, you actually alert but laidback, which matches the beat pretty well. You got the uptempo feel but you not yelling across the track. Nice track. Add a mufukkin Chorus, nigga lol.

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