I tear the page, fuck what anyone finds to be appealin',
'Cuz money is power, so it's bad when you use your power to steal it

Def a dope line right here, i pretty much agree with DTH, your story telling ability can only get better with more practice....i thought you did a good job on the WHOLE story, but i think certain areas of how you relate the details of the story can be improved...

stay up

-Philly

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