this is very touching, my favourite lines were

They find power and rely on an everlasting religion

Knowing their breath shall be taken no matter what
Screams can't be denied even with your eyes shut

its very emotional, the structure was very neat, good use of metas. overall a nice poem. good stuff lol

RTF plz on dead weight

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!