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Old 08-14-03, 04:34 PM   #15
RythmicTendicies
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Rhyming/Flow
Was O.k, The Bras Could've Been More of The Same Length, They Were Awful "messy", You Know..Sort Of If It Was Just Typed Quickly Or Jotted Or Something...But It was O.k, It balanced Our Pretty Well...7/10

Vocab/Wordplay
NIce Wordplay In here Dawg, "toughened inside, i'll Write Nothing, if theres Nothing to write", nice line There Dawg..Good Vocab As Well, But It was Average..7/10

Concept/Topic
Hopelessness As UNderstate... Said...Nice Collection Of Thoughts, But I Could'nt Find One Exact Toic, But As You Said..You Didn;t Need Imagry...6/10

Overall
7/10, Was Good, Not Your Best Mind You...Sad To Here Your Not Droppin' Anything For A While, ...

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