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04-13-09, 07:42 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Semi Finals: Bobericc_Lyrics vs JTR
IP: 9403 C0AE
DO OR DIE ____________________ Battles set Monday Verses Due Friday Midnight (ET) Voting closed Sunday Midnight (ET) Line Limit- Min 10 lines, Max 20 lines _____________________
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04-13-09, 08:20 PM | #2 | ||||
Jack The Ripper
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IP: F540 07B2
makes sense oneway didnt wanna put himself against either of us
hahaha good luck homie i'm going 20... if you wanna do 30, i'd be down for that too
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04-13-09, 11:39 PM | #3 | |||||||
text.even geico can do it
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IP: 3AE9 A7D5
yo im checking 20 is cool
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04-16-09, 04:34 PM | #4 | |||||||
text.even geico can do it
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IP: 3AE9 A7D5
I'm taking this man, its been real!
wish me luck next round I'm fixing his bluff, fucking reaper samurai? I'm not getting a loss, even after I drop the ball on all these jacks, I'm not picking them up I'll chew up your drop, basic with lines, your the troubled one better take it in stride, like trading your life for some bubble gum this rapper I'll crumble up, a fag who tries to roll with live chicks and again if the question presented was do or or die, you'd die bitch! lose an eye from tight fists, syllables hit a weak and squeamish leech, talk about my rhyming, fuck your whining, you'll never SEE this THING your not worth a single swing, alpha got you, that loss is swallowed see what your sword do, leave ya head warped through more than Aku squirts of blood shoots, you despicable worm, bleeding in motion and the day your dope bitch.. ..................is when us doing nothing is the reason for voting! depleting your focus, stabbing jack the alias, next motion's to fall just fucking with you.. Joshin' you, is really just the joke of it all my tourney to call, Civil's gone 'cause he wasn't quick, with my money I got ya ass kicked and your abs ripped like that bitch from saw three! wont even win impossibly.. I'll see you dead and clapped down fast bullet pierce your silver armor and leave your head the background flag ready for a blackout blast? dude, your so fucking weak and your gay posting pics of your stomach in a thread titled what people would say.. hahaa theres my 20 J. goodluck |
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04-17-09, 02:04 PM | #5 | |||||
Jack The Ripper
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IP: F540 07B2
You wanna challenge me? On MY homesite? Oh I don't think so bitch
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I'm not quoting that cuz it's dope, I mean the line doesn't suck... But for some odd reason, it's just what this battle reminded me of (I wonder why?) You're so fucking bad with FLIPPED CONCEPTS, quit bein phony bitch If you wanted to drop a newclear verse you'd need a pen filled with plutonium ^Wordplay owning him, why'd you even bother you bastard? His drive to win resembles Hyundai's cuz he Sonata good rapper And who the fuck spaces their username like that? God you're an herb, kid The way you have the underscore in your name and in all of your verses I don't hate this cat, I just wanna break his back and wreck his spinal For having a verse that bites so much it's starting to resemble Final's You wanna know what's embaressing? Think hard, guess, take a crack at it TEXT. Even Geico can do it, but Bob's STILL fucking wack at it See I'm going to win this, cuz I got the better rhymes But sure i'll wish you luck your next round ...when Civil opens strategic incline for the second time Alpha beat me, too bad not in the finals cuz his poor ass need the cash quick & ur just like him, a chip off the old block... describes your daily eating habbits You're a creepy bastad, which is why ladies don't find you're cute It's sad when even Jesus was a virgin and got nailed more times then you I aint lieing dude, ^^that aint a fake personal so don't fret dawg Cuz it's based off the audio you posted in songs forum ...it's clear you never made anyone head-bob They call me Jack The Ripper for a reason. I murder whores.
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It's JTR, lyrical art
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04-17-09, 02:49 PM | #6 | ||||||
New Jack
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IP: 15D3 63C9
I'm fixing his bluff, fucking reaper samurai? I'm not getting a loss,
even after I drop the ball on all these jacks, I'm not picking them up LOL, great opener I'll chew up your drop, basic with lines, your the troubled one better take it in stride, like trading your life for some bubble gum barely descent ' this rapper I'll crumble up, a fag who tries to roll with live chicks and again if the question presented was do or or die, you'd die bitch! LOL, this was dope lose an eye from tight fists, syllables hit a weak and squeamish leech, talk about my rhyming, fuck your whining, you'll never SEE this THING barely descent your not worth a single swing, alpha got you, that loss is swallowed see what your sword do, leave ya head warped through more than Aku Nice wordplay and creative squirts of blood shoots, you despicable worm, bleeding in motion and the day your dope bitch.. ..................is when us doing nothing is the reason for voting! descent depleting your focus, stabbing jack the alias, next motion's to fall just fucking with you.. Joshin' you, is really just the joke of it all descent my tourney to call, Civil's gone 'cause he wasn't quick, with my money I got ya ass kicked and your abs ripped like that bitch from saw three! LOL wont even win impossibly.. I'll see you dead and clapped down fast bullet pierce your silver armor and leave your head the background flag barely descent ready for a blackout blast? dude, your so fucking weak and your gay posting pics of your stomach in a thread titled what people would say descent closer -------------------------------- I'm not quoting that cuz it's dope, I mean the line doesn't suck... But for some odd reason, it's just what this battle reminded me of (I wonder why?) descent opener You're so fucking bad with FLIPPED CONCEPTS, quit bein phony bitch If you wanted to drop a newclear verse you'd need a pen filled with plutonium LOL, this was dope ^Wordplay owning him, why'd you even bother you bastard? His drive to win resembles Hyundai's cuz he Sonata good rapper LOL, this was dope too And who the fuck spaces their username like that? God you're an herb, kid The way you have the underscore in your name and in all of your verses LOL, good hit I don't hate this cat, I just wanna break his back and wreck his spinal For having a verse that bites so much it's starting to resemble Final's barely descent You wanna know what's embaressing? Think hard, guess, take a crack at it TEXT. Even Geico can do it, but Bob's STILL fucking wack at it LOL, this actually made me laugh See I'm going to win this, cuz I got the better rhymes But sure i'll wish you luck your next round ...when Civil opens strategic incline for the second time descent Alpha beat me, too bad not in the finals cuz his poor ass need the cash quick & ur just like him, a chip off the old block... describes your daily eating habbits descent You're a creepy bastad, which is why ladies don't find you're cute It's sad when even Jesus was a virgin and got nailed more times then you no comment on religious stuff I aint lieing dude, ^^that aint a fake personal so don't fret dawg Cuz it's based off the audio you posted in songs forum ...it's clear you never made anyone head-bob descent closer ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ This was a cool battler. Both people came hard, but I believe JTR had more quoteables and a more entertaining verese which lead to harder hitting connected punches. Vote - JTR, for more consistency connecting harder punches
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04-17-09, 08:20 PM | #7 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 2BA6 1F0F
I'm probably not allowed to vote, but JTR pretty much swept bob in this.
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04-17-09, 08:37 PM | #8 | |||||||
text.even geico can do it
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IP: 3AE9 A7D5
nah you cud vote.
good shit man... |
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04-17-09, 09:09 PM | #9 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 2BA6 1F0F
I'm fixing his bluff, fucking reaper samurai? I'm not getting a loss,
even after I drop the ball on all these jacks, I'm not picking them up this was cool. the multies were tight and the punch was a nice way to open strong I'll chew up your drop, basic with lines, your the troubled one better take it in stride, like trading your life for some bubble gum nah, i've seen this flipped very similar to this before so the fresh angle is lost on me personally this rapper I'll crumble up, a fag who tries to roll with live chicks and again if the question presented was do or or die, you'd die bitch! I liked the idea in general, but I felt you fell short on the execution.. something is just off for me. lose an eye from tight fists, syllables hit a weak and squeamish leech, talk about my rhyming, fuck your whining, you'll never SEE this THING i didn't like this your not worth a single swing, alpha got you, that loss is swallowed see what your sword do, leave ya head warped through more than Aku this was a cool flip, wordplay was nice and the samurai jack reference was solid squirts of blood shoots, you despicable worm, bleeding in motion and the day your dope bitch.. ..................is when us doing nothing is the reason for voting! this was kinda funny, felt like you cud've done more with it though depleting your focus, stabbing jack the alias, next motion's to fall just fucking with you.. Joshin' you, is really just the joke of it all it will work for those who haven't seen it, but i've seen josh battling for going on 3-4 years so i've seen pretty much every josh flip there is my tourney to call, Civil's gone 'cause he wasn't quick, with my money I got ya ass kicked and your abs ripped like that bitch from saw three! old school style with this punch, I can dig it wont even win impossibly.. I'll see you dead and clapped down fast bullet pierce your silver armor and leave your head the background flag this wasn't that strong a punch ready for a blackout blast? dude, your so fucking weak and your gay posting pics of your stomach in a thread titled what people would say.. this could've been a banger, the personal angle was there I just didn't like the wording and general execution of the punch. for me it just wasn't that aggressive enough.. if that makes sense, lol Overall, a better verse than what I've seen before. It's all down to opinion and whilst some have appreciated most of your stuff.. for me you just haven't brought enough consistency in the past. It's like most verses I've seen you drop have had bangers mixed in with some sucky ass shit. This verse was tidy. It had some solid hits. Your multies were banging. The wordplay was strong in parts and you hit with some entertaining punches to. Overall though, some shit just lacked in execution. The concepts were good.. a couple I would've left out like the Joshin flip.. you probably shud've figured that would be played on him by now. The stride shit is probably fresh on here, I've seen it elsewhere so it lost appeal to me. A good verse though, more consistent and polished than others I've seen from you. I just think if you come more consistent and hit some more bangers you could be an even bigger threat. ============================================ I'm not quoting that cuz it's dope, I mean the line doesn't suck... But for some odd reason, it's just what this battle reminded me of (I wonder why?) nah, you didn't use the quote well enough and this just comes off as simplistic. I can dig the swag, but there was really nothing else to this punch You're so fucking bad with FLIPPED CONCEPTS, quit bein phony bitch If you wanted to drop a newclear verse you'd need a pen filled with plutonium nope! this has got to be recycled. I've seen this shit before. it may be a REALLY similar flip... either way, its not good in my eyes because I've seen it before ^Wordplay owning him, why'd you even bother you bastard? His drive to win resembles Hyundai's cuz he Sonata good rapper the wordplay was pretty cool here, nothing more And who the fuck spaces their username like that? God you're an herb, kid The way you have the underscore in your name and in all of your verses underscore was cool.. this was a decent enough flip, but cud've been better I don't hate this cat, I just wanna break his back and wreck his spinal For having a verse that bites so much it's starting to resemble Final's lol, sorry.. but I still ain't tired of seeing Final get ridiculed.. this was a cool way of flipping that shit and using it against bob.. and its relevant to You wanna know what's embaressing? Think hard, guess, take a crack at it TEXT. Even Geico can do it, but Bob's STILL fucking wack at it lmao, this was tight.. the comic value was strong and swag was nice to See I'm going to win this, cuz I got the better rhymes But sure i'll wish you luck your next round ...when Civil opens strategic incline for the second time misdirection is cool, swag is there... wording could be stronger Alpha beat me, too bad not in the finals cuz his poor ass need the cash quick & ur just like him, a chip off the old block... describes your daily eating habbits ehh, this was cool I guess You're a creepy bastad, which is why ladies don't find you're cute It's sad when even Jesus was a virgin and got nailed more times then you rofl, I laughed at this.. its fresh to me, but I get the feeling a concept like this has to have been flipped before I aint lieing dude, ^^that aint a fake personal so don't fret dawg Cuz it's based off the audio you posted in songs forum ...it's clear you never made anyone head-bob ehhh, head bob.. nah.. it just don't work for me Not your strongest verse, not even close. I have to admit, every time I read a verse from you I am disappointed. ROFL. That's not to say they suck, you always make me laugh. I just still compare everything to that weedhead verse you dropped back in the day.. and that still reigns supreme as my all-time favorite JTR verse. I felt you came stronger, there was more of an attacking element in your verse. Also, I am a big fan of swag and misdirection and you incorporated all that into your verse. You had the comedy that I come to expect, I got some laughs. That geico shit was fucking hilarious and the jesus nailed shit. I can't believe I haven't seen that before seeing as though I've been battling across the net for some years now. Overall, I felt you were more consistent and just displayed a more polished verse. Bob had some solid hits, but I felt yours were just a little harder and that is what gives you the win here. I should deduct points for that newclear shit though.. but bob had the stride shit so it sorta balanced shit out for me. VOTE: JTR for a stronger verse. good battle though. |
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04-19-09, 10:59 PM | #10 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 2BA6 1F0F
Man, only two votes.
This ain't even a battle involving me and I think it sucks that it's only got two votes. Fucking slack ass motherfuckers need to get off they asses. |
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04-20-09, 02:57 PM | #11 | |||||||
Addicted
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IP: 9403 C0AE
I'm fixing his bluff, fucking reaper samurai? I'm not getting a loss,
even after I drop the ball on all these jacks, I'm not picking them up this was ok, wasn't that dope though I'll chew up your drop, basic with lines, your the troubled one better take it in stride, like trading your life for some bubble gum wasn't feeling this rapper I'll crumble up, a fag who tries to roll with live chicks and again if the question presented was do or or die, you'd die bitch! pretty basic lose an eye from tight fists, syllables hit a weak and squeamish leech, talk about my rhyming, fuck your whining, you'll never SEE this THING na your not worth a single swing, alpha got you, that loss is swallowed see what your sword do, leave ya head warped through more than Aku not real effective squirts of blood shoots, you despicable worm, bleeding in motion and the day your dope bitch.. ..................is when us doing nothing is the reason for voting! lol, not bad depleting your focus, stabbing jack the alias, next motion's to fall just fucking with you.. Joshin' you, is really just the joke of it all not bad my tourney to call, Civil's gone 'cause he wasn't quick, with my money I got ya ass kicked and your abs ripped like that bitch from saw three! na wont even win impossibly.. I'll see you dead and clapped down fast bullet pierce your silver armor and leave your head the background flag was ok ready for a blackout blast? dude, your so fucking weak and your gay posting pics of your stomach in a thread titled what people would say.. ok I guess never had a real blow away line, some small ones. I'm not quoting that cuz it's dope, I mean the line doesn't suck... But for some odd reason, it's just what this battle reminded me of (I wonder why?) wasn't feeling You're so fucking bad with FLIPPED CONCEPTS, quit bein phony bitch If you wanted to drop a newclear verse you'd need a pen filled with plutonium this was ok, wording wasn't perfect though ^Wordplay owning him, why'd you even bother you bastard? His drive to win resembles Hyundai's cuz he Sonata good rapper not bad And who the fuck spaces their username like that? God you're an herb, kid The way you have the underscore in your name and in all of your verses this was cool I don't hate this cat, I just wanna break his back and wreck his spinal For having a verse that bites so much it's starting to resemble Final's no You wanna know what's embaressing? Think hard, guess, take a crack at it TEXT. Even Geico can do it, but Bob's STILL fucking wack at it lol, wasn't bad kinda basic See I'm going to win this, cuz I got the better rhymes But sure i'll wish you luck your next round ...when Civil opens strategic incline for the second time not feeling Alpha beat me, too bad not in the finals cuz his poor ass need the cash quick & ur just like him, a chip off the old block... describes your daily eating habbits na You're a creepy bastad, which is why ladies don't find you're cute It's sad when even Jesus was a virgin and got nailed more times then you this was ok generic though I aint lieing dude, ^^that aint a fake personal so don't fret dawg Cuz it's based off the audio you posted in songs forum ...it's clear you never made anyone head-bob not bad worrding was off though not a one sided battle at all, JTR had some petter punches but also nothing really dope/ vote JTR
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When I be selling grams I’m slinging bombs like Uncle Sam Myspace It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal... But it's treason when you turn your back on your people. |
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04-20-09, 02:58 PM | #12 | |||||||
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IP: 9403 C0AE
JTR wins 3-0 and advances
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