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09-01-08, 03:32 PM | #1 | ||
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yo shit was good, but some spots you forced the rhymes... so it would end up as an uneven rhyme like in-vision said, it was an interesting topic and some of the lines i was like...damn that was good. you had some good creativity or descriptive lines which made me see yourself talking or doing a certain action. i liked it and over all i give you 8.5-10.
keep dropping, you def. got skill and talent.
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