Whats the world comin to? Theres wars spannin the globe...
As i glance at the road... Ahead i reach for a cannon to hold...
Theres people sufferin everywhere, famished and cold...
While bush is countin money, comfortably, relaxed in his throne...
Sleezy politicians everywhere backin his reign...
With a simple math problem he'd be rackin his brain...
We need a leader who cares about the people he leads...
Instead of this fuckin idiot, whos evil indeed...
Im a patriot fa sho, thats why im singin this song...
Cause i see the end of the world and i believe that its wrong...
So im standin here praying that im breachin the path...
To make you fuckas see that we should be impeachin his ass...
Its a long process i know but please let it begin...
Because i love livin life and im dreadin the end...

song will get finished later.

first i LOVE the flow..it flows perfect,
lyrics are tight aint bad got some multies in there,
stayed on point throughout the whole thing,
i could easily vision this to a beat..not bad
kinda short but i guess u aint finished

ima give this a 8/10 keep droppin

p.s finished or not this'll probably be closed if u dont drop links

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Lol with the lazy ass mods on this site? haha thanks for the feed uppin.

^^lol i dunno i think ysdat has done a good job so far
indephs puters sooo fucked up that he cant even start it no more
and he aint even living at home no more (i wont get in detail)
so u you cant really blame him for not doing anything
and the other cat is probably like u said plain out lazy lol

but yea...despite all the bad o.m's this was really good
u should start doing audios

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two links or Ill boot you in the face.

^ lol

to the feed:

this was a nice piece...one of the better ones that i have seen on rapverse since i have been here

the flow was incredible...got a lil off towards the end but came back..

the lyrics were also nice...not very complex but the message was there..

i really liked this piece...i am hopin that you post these links so i am able to see the rest of it...

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I remember puttin quarters in the game and the Jukebox/
now i'm puttin quarters of them thangs in a shoe box/
Then i break em down no bags its just loose rocks/
no pump against me and the world i'm like 2pac
^^T-Rex