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Old 04-17-09, 05:17 PM   #1
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AWESOME TRACK!!!

check it out tell me what you think

http://www.zshare.net/audio/58798663bdaa1f3f/
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Old 04-18-09, 12:16 AM   #2
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Mix that primary singing vocal a little more.
It just pops in and sounds pretty loud.

but damn..i like this concept.
nice entrance attitude. good flow, that breathless part was pretty sickkk IMO.
you remind me so much of Jin, no homo. lol
you just sound like him to me.

the second verse is just as good as the first.

uhm im thinkin on the hook add a little effect to it or the backing vocals to give it a voicemailish sound and mix the primary a lil more.

otherwise. illl
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Old 04-18-09, 12:51 AM   #3
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yeah i had to do this in a day for a compatetion, but yeah i had the voicemail effect on her but her highs are so up there it was too peircing....i unno, i do need to mix a lil more
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dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 04-18-09, 07:47 PM   #4
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damn you sound gay on the answering machine.the girl can sing and the lyrics too the hook are o.k.your speaking too slow and adding too many words which makes you fall off the snare in a couple places.shit is kinda boring how you flowed here.maybe i will jack your hook and beat which aint nothing but a bass line and a cheap piano playing.
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Old 04-18-09, 11:02 PM   #5
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you should say something cooler on the intro phone call.. the tracks interesting.......no thanks to the beat for that cause it has absolutly no flair to it.. the girl singer is good, not enough intrumentals sort of even screws it around for her...

it all sounds good.........i think the beat is just the main problem with this song... you need an intrumental with something that just makes it...
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Old 05-02-09, 03:17 AM   #6
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wasnt really feeling it hooks decent
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