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01-18-07, 10:48 PM | #2 | |
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you need two links, heres a piece of mine rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239072 its not bad for a quick key, you managed to cover a lot, but i think that it was a little random, and it sort of had a poetry feel to it...not sayin it is...but it felt better just talkin the script instead of tryin to put a beat to it, i think more consistant internals would be cool, cos most of the was end rhyme...but still its ight for a quick key and i look forward to reading a more concentrated drop from you... stay up fam...and dont forget to get your links...peace |
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