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View Poll Results: K-M vs Mimesis
Mimesis 5 62.50%
K-M 3 37.50%
Voters: 8. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 01-29-08, 01:08 PM   #16
KM
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IP: 627A 9BFF

Quote:
Originally Posted by Bangalore
Voted For: Mimesis

Mims took this one way more coherent even from the first line , word play was by far more advance along with the count on each line. meta's sort of lacked but on the long run most of the lines in this battle that caught my eye were on mims side

K-m
you didn't have super catchy punches , work on your word play and make sure if your going to use punch lines that they hit harder than
"do i need more explanations or do u wanna see gore....
i pick apart 19 year old kids in battles....
....like scavengers eating dead mammals at seas shores!...."

work on your openers and closers too

out of 5 mims has 3.898
K-M had 2.2782 out of 5
or better known as

3.8/5
2.2/5




^^^^^^ yeah i wasn't really doing punches....i was doing alot more personnels.....trying something different cause i usually dont do personnels....just experimenting.....but i do alot better punches than that i just threw that one out cause it made sense to me at the time.....thanks for the advice and voting anyways.....thanks to everyone else that voted to.....o yeah... dun ....and poet.....yall explain your votes better next time......im not sweatin the shit now they all ready posted.....good verse to Mims....~1~
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Old 02-16-08, 04:43 AM   #17
KM
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IP: 44DF FD4E

..............uppin!!!............................ .......
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Old 02-23-08, 02:11 PM   #18
Adam
 
From: Canada
IP: D088 20AB

Voted For: Mimesis

Wow..

I don't want to break this down because all you have to do is read it to realize it. If you remove this vote I'll just come back and vote with an explanation on my alias just despite you being a herb and getting it DQ'ed.

Vote: Mimesis.
 
Old 02-23-08, 05:31 PM   #19
Ransum
Banned: Biting
 
IP: 9137 E2D4

Voted For: K-M

You're just a gay guy runnin' through spittin' nothing but lame rhymes
So if you step on mine it's just because you're exploding with played lines
^^^eeh but ok...

I slay men like K-M, you're a faggot and this shit's getting absurd, bruh
You're a wack dude reppin' two unknown crews and an alias nobody's heard of
WEAK..

Now you step to the champ? - you won't be able to catch or stop me
So if I made a grave mistake it's because I have no place to stash your body
LOL NICE...

Motherfucker, I'm better then you - so just listen and stop, bitch
Cause these are cutthroat battles and I can't wait to deliver the promise
aight...

I'm just a king, see - ever fucking battle that I'm in I bring heat
And you winning is such a long shot Sportscenter will put the shit on repeat
Decent...

It may be weeks, this site is dead but you'll still get popped and lose hard
If voting on this site ain't a bitch, at least we're all still positive that you are
eeh but aight...

I ain't saving a shot - I'm just coming through and making you stop
Because I'll have you fading out faster than Lebron James when he's hot
NAH not feeling this...

I know why you ain't rappin' - it's true, everybody's just laughin' at you
Your faggot voice breaks more Windows than the best hackers could do
lol pretty good...

And as I keep on running through this bitch, it's really making me think
. . .How the fuck your ugly ass is shit faced without ever taking a drink?
eeeh but not working really..

It seems that you've been wishin' for death, and best believe I'ma help
Cause you've been sub par for 3 years, and history just keeps repeating itself
decent ending...

. .so shut the fuck up and quit.
^^ nah i dout it...



vs



i slay the weak everyday i speak.....
flip "Tokens" then "step on his head and tail".....***
.....like hes "praying at my feet for mercy"......
lol nice start...

u say u kill but u yourself might end up a deceased corpes....
....like a new unsolved murder mystery at the Verde East Dorms....***
decent...

do i need more explanations or do u wanna see gore....
i pick apart 19 year old kids in battles....
....like scavengers eating dead mammals at seas shores!....
decent and nasty pic in my head lol...

your a disgrace....i'll bring u close to after life have this shit over great....
but your mom should of had an abortion prior to October Eight!.....****
nice personal...

this guys a gangsta ? on the net but in the real your a nerd in college....
so its safe to say your a fake in RV with false words of knowledge.....
good...
i see u have no losses must be a gift great from heaven....
i'll go for the "killer hit" with a "punch quick" get u caugh
in "187"....(78-1)*****
decent line... but the reference to he's record dont work... unless he was 18-7 ...

'check check check' this out u aimmed to get hurt your flames wont work....
And You Are? bout to "Take a Lost so be Afraid of the Worst!".....
decent...

if we fought with fist i guarantee i would leave painful crators....
in your face and have it dripping more Red than your Name and Avator...
GOOD HIT...

u use to AS summers but my heat u cant stand when i rip it quick...
droppin since 04 so most all ready know Mimes-is shit......
a bit weaker ending then expected but aight...

Click. Click. BOOM.
^^ lol....


if i had to vote off top i would say tie...
if i had to def vote bar for bar and who i felt was more consistent insted of hitting hard then droping a weak punch then hit good again...

vote: K-M

but memsis had a few good punches no dout just was less consistent....
 
Old 02-25-08, 02:41 PM   #20
SkepTik
Herb
 
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From: 916
IP: CE76 E868

Voted For: Mimesis

Good battle i liked both drops it wasnt totally one sided but ima have to give this one to Minesis for having more punches that were clever and hit harder than k-m but like i said good battle overall k-m ya drop was a lil slopy and some lines seemed forced I would like to see a rematch and u spend a lil more time on ya drop

vote=Mimesis for more clever and harder hitting punchlines
^^^thats wat battles are all about!!!
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Old 02-27-08, 06:44 PM   #21
Valor
A Reflection Of The Past
 
From: inside your nightmare's
IP: 5ACC 928C

Voted For: Mimesis

mimesis not one of your greatest verses dude, but fuckit you didntneed much man, decent structure,punches and personals.....you had 1 really good personal tho that i favored the most which was already explainesd in previous posts...good shit

km
uve still gotta alot to learn you structure and flow has improved and ur doing better at punches but now you just need to throw some damage work on your creativeness and delivery

meh battle....kaka heads

v/mims
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