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08-26-03, 12:22 AM | #1 | ||||||
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not on beat....need help
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just holla im always willin to help..........
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09-18-03, 01:32 AM | #2 | |||||||
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count syallables when ur writing, example
(1bar) im comin thro with uzi techs and swords (8) im the most hardcore that i won a grammy award (9) yaya crappy rhyme its an example, just write like that and no when to take breaths, i use commas to help me write
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09-18-03, 02:03 PM | #3 | |||||||
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Lmao................ The first line is 10 syllables and the 2nd line is 13 syllables......lol..... Anyways....if you want help.....read the tutorials....you'll find them if you're not blind......There at the top of this forum...... If you still cant find help....post back asking for exactly what help you need............. |
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10-10-03, 10:11 AM | #4 | ||||||
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you dont count syllables to flow...
its called...get some rhythm...lol besides...counting syllables will produce the same result throughout the whole song...good songs don't contain the same amount of syllables on each line, or close to it... use jay z for an example...its called riding the beat... you don't use every part of the beat for lyrics...there are pauses, holds, parts that are faster, parts that are drawn out...etc... "I keep askin, I keep on askin/ but everytime I speak I suffer deeper gashes/" Nowhere near the same ammount of syllables...yet it flows perfect...because there is a delay where the lines begin and end... its how you write, and whether you have rhythm or not... |
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10-13-03, 12:36 AM | #5 | ||||||
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^true.... cuz you would definitely sound like your readin' from a paper... if every syllable count is even with the next bar....
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10-14-03, 04:43 PM | #6 | ||||||
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Me Showing That I Wont Give Into The Tyranny..Post # 2
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10-15-03, 03:06 AM | #7 | |||||
Dope Beats . . . period.
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WTF, I can rhyme that with no problem. It don't matter how many syllables are in a line . . . Ex. (A bar from a old battle) - What's the deal / If you think you touchin me in battle, you must be Pinnochio . . . GET REAL //
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10-15-03, 07:26 AM | #8 | ||||||
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same amount of syllables is important, but whats more important is having the same or similar length of time on each line... like luminous said, if you make a pause, as long as first line + pause = 2nd line its gonna sound ok, but without the pause it prolly would sound weird with the beat
^ yes i prolly realise i have no idea wtf im talkin about but hey, i tried |
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10-15-03, 08:51 PM | #9 | ||||||
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tru dat it its not flowin it done evn ryme so how u gonna win battles with dat shit
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10-16-03, 01:45 PM | #10 | |||||
Dope Beats . . . period.
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wrong, you just gotta know how to work the beat
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