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Old 07-16-06, 10:10 PM   #1
Journal!st
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this was a good battle i may say both came very well prepared and very well ready to drop good and decent verses to nice pics.

KEMPO= nice strucutre and degree onstayin on point with nice imagery and flow but i felt like you lacked emotion and vocab..complexity was nice but could have been done or worded more better but still nice job man real nice.

ORIGINAL= your job in this was great again your dropped unique..though in some point like you came off wrong and the metaz werent suppose to be there but nice job though nice meotion and story line and you caught my eye from the start to finish my dude!


my vote goes to original.
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