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Old 05-17-05, 12:22 AM   #1
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Old 05-17-05, 11:27 PM   #2
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I toss and turn this nightmare a flame to my brain
my thoughts just burn..hippy protesters slander our name
and from cops they squirm..fighting in riots they expose my shame
The media shows soldiers,feeding there nose,with sniffs of blow
but they dont know,that is whats keep most on there toes
keeps them sane.they enter there own world,the drugs ease the pain
gives them a glimpse of heaven while in hell,teases the brain
meanwhile I wake in a coldsweat..shorts breaths..wondering
where my foes rest, will I live or my soul rest,i feel death haunting me
calling me pleading with me to end the misery,tempting me
I clutch my rifle and let of rounds off to drown out the whispering..
here i waddle in this rice field, its been raining for days I dont want to fight here
Let the communism have its way,I seen to many die here..
my comrads are frustrated
so when they aint fighting themselves they raping the women
Viet Cong straping kids with bombs,so we our scopes aiming at children
My soul is numb of feeling..I aint cried in months..Im done believing
Screw the U.S,Uncle Sam neglecting his nephews and nieces..
whats left of my battalion has been battered to pieces
we lose a soldier a day, endure a explosion a day,our tank
just rolling in pain,through the debri and the smoldering flames
against all odds,the purpose of existence against the certainty of death
we struggling and resisting,nail and tooth each step..each breath
even though most the time our enemy goes unseen
takes a life or two and blends black into the scene
so as backward as it seems we sit and waste ammo..blasting at the trees
sometimes i sit pleading with the stars to fall and kill us all
or for God to take my sight and mind,so I can forget all I saw..
seen so much pain,some ashamed to pray so they mumble under there breath
Me i just trod ahead,another soilder strugglin against death..
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Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
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Old 05-18-05, 05:17 PM   #3
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Old 05-23-05, 01:56 AM   #4
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Spoken Prophecy wins due to no-show...
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