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Old 12-08-06, 09:47 PM   #1
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Sleep On Me

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did this quick lil verse while listenin to that new Pac's Life album.
i believe it was the "Sleep" beat i was listenin to while i did this
incase you wanna record yourself doin my shyt, maybe get
yourself a couple of fans but im new to this whole online shyt
so im just chillin lookin for some feedback. lookin to get in on some
battles too so hit me up if your interested. enjoy.

it used to be rare to see me ever keepin a promise//
wasnt believed to be honest but now im knee deep in garmets//
tryina completely be an artist is the only thing keepin my harnesed//
'n if the industry aint feelin me, cant sleep on these hardships//
gettin my cash on, all im tryina do is succeed//
hidin in my room tryina find a relief, wide eyed in my sleep//
soon as i got a vibe turn on the light, its time to earn my keep//
finished up the first verse first time i heard this beat//
loop it on repeat, then get to makin the magic//
then throw it away the next day if the taste is just average//
cause when i leave here i plan to leave an impression//
too dangerous for beef, no need to be questioned//
i can see it we destined to meet up in heavin//
didnt make this Pac album but dont worry, ill be in the next one//


-ENTICING [Alias of the made to be greatest]


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