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02-02-06, 08:00 AM | #1 | |||||||
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keystyle
IP: 0A5E D29F
~You niggaz not ready for this I spit wreckless~
~Im the type to get you strangled wit cha neckless~ ~Niggaz know what it is I'll fuckin shoot out cha ribs~ ~Da Fox bring beef and i aint talking bout meatloaf kid~ ~So you bettah get low when i bust~ ~Turn yo ass bakk to dust nigga i dont give fuck~ ~Just maybe I'll take ya lady~ ~And cock her legs bakk like she was having a baby~ ~I tried to play it cool but she was acting fool~ ~I cant lie i was in it like a deep ass swimming pool~ ~Spittin flames man you know my my name man~ ~Im like Karl Malone im bout my Mail man~ uppin 4 some feed
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02-02-06, 12:29 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 0A5E D29F
dont sleep on me can i get some feed
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02-02-06, 02:45 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 5712 1E2A
.................................lol
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02-02-06, 02:46 PM | #4 | ||||
-da prophit-
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IP: CF86 0039
it was ok for a newb- but u need some work on ur multies. nuttin special reallly i guess.
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02-02-06, 10:05 PM | #5 | ||||
I Chill in Asylums
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IP: FF99 CB67
this was aight but like scanz said it was nothing special, u need to put more multies and internal rhyming in it to make it flow smoother. If u want to practice go to the cypher area and just keep droppin freestyles and elevate. Peace.
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02-03-06, 08:23 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 0A5E D29F
it's thanks 4 the feed and the spam
reverse put ass nigga
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