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01-25-04, 11:34 PM | #1 | ||||||
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MW title Match: Walter Wall (4-1) vs. Dimense (5-2)
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Check in and agree on line amount Regular League Rules apply Verses are due Friday 12:00pm CT Must have post 3 links to votes in your check-in post For ever link you are missing you get docked a vote Matches will be closed Sunday night. Come dope.. Last edited by Feeble Minded : 01-25-04 at 11:46 PM. |
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01-26-04, 01:01 PM | #2 | ||||||
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Av vs. Auspicious Evolve vs. Feeble Horud Skys vs. B2K Last edited by Walter Wall : 02-01-04 at 01:38 PM. |
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01-29-04, 12:42 PM | #3 | ||||||
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In .. 10 -12 ?
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01-30-04, 08:14 PM | #4 | ||||||
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this is all i had time for .. well have a rematch whenever you want
Soon as I drop..Count on Wall Dissapearin like Hide an Seek Cuz like a 'Shootin Star.. ya 3-0 run in the Triple L was just a lucky streak Mw and Tag Champ? U had no hope..without feebles help U didn’t earn Shit..like an inside joke.. ur only kiddin urself Piece By Piece Im Rippin Walls apart.. Like the one in Berlin Walters just a Pussy.. Reason why this Beef iz Curtainz Im certain u n Volve have such similar styles ..u gotta admit B/t not skill wise..its cuz like Richard u long for Dick.. Lil Queer..ur Shit..Fuck you an that fag crew of Trix DéjÃ- vu..Psst..Silly Faggots….Dicks are for Chicks Or Bonifide?there jus Bitches who’ll ride ur Sack Strong So if theres a woman behind every great man…. ………Know that Feebs’s wearin tha Strap On?
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01-30-04, 08:25 PM | #5 | ||||||
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Its obvious….
dim’s not bright, Ill keep it simple, fuck wordplay He throws his ……. hands in the air at my command ……….. …………………..like it was hearing test Thursday! It’s ok…. Dim’s a fan, Ill sit back relax and let him blow Fuck’n hippie….. Keep on truck’n…….so you can finally go tow to tow! I know… This expeditions got you quitt’n, as predicted Im a win grand Dimense belongs in middlewait…..in the line at Disneyland! Hypochrit!....... You’ve lost battles from A2Z, don’t convolute Fuck you pay me?........ This is GTA 3……….now watch me beat this prostitute! You’re a fag to boot….So Im a take my tim’s to ure temple Checked in late….. I knew I smelled pussy…..now we’re both scentimental! I’m dope and your far from me, we’re not connected Allegory ripped ya……… even the people who beat u aren’t respected! |
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01-30-04, 08:52 PM | #6 | |||||||||||
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..Pretty Good Read...Dimense Had Played Punches In Some Parts (Berlin Wall Line...Heard It Before...I Believe Against The Same Person).....Walter Had Corny Punches In Some Parts (Disney Land Line & GTA 3 Line) And Your Opener Lost Me.....But You Both Dropped Dope In Some Parts....Good Read...
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^1st Line Good Personal, 2nd Line Was Nice Quote:
^1st Line Was Played, 2nd Line Was Funny..LoL Dimense Also Had A Nice Closer.... Quote:
^1st Line Was Funny, 2nd Line Dope Quote:
^1st Line Dope, 2nd Line Couldve Been Worded Better....Sounds Like You Mean You And Him... Punches - Walter (Threw More) Personals - Dimense (Walter Only Mentioned Past Battles) Wordplay - Tie Structure - Dimense Vocab - Walter Vote - Walter....You Barely Got This Honestly.....This Should Be A Close One....But You Get My Vote For Merely Throwing More Punches Than Your Opponent....Nice Work From You Both Though... |
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01-30-04, 09:08 PM | #7 | ||||||
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^ no this really shouldn't be that close ...
Soon as I drop..Count on Wall Dissapearin like Hide an Seek Cuz like a 'Shootin Star.. ya 3-0 run in the Triple L was just a lucky streak First line was technically a punch but it was just, basically filler wasnt really a hitting punch..same for the second... ehh punches... Mw and Tag Champ? U had no hope..without feebles help U didn’t earn Shit..like an inside joke.. ur only kiddin urself me and walter weren't tag team champs. . your lines so far seem very rushed... Piece By Piece Im Rippin Walls apart.. Like the one in Berlin Walters just a Pussy.. Reason why this Beef iz Curtainz avg punch... Im certain u n Volve have such similar styles ..u gotta admit B/t not skill wise..its cuz like Richard u long for Dick.. badly worded. Lil Queer..ur Shit..Fuck you an that fag crew of Trix DéjÃ- vu..Psst..Silly Faggots….Dicks are for Chicks no. just no. Or Bonifide?there jus Bitches who’ll ride ur Sack Strong So if theres a woman behind every great man…. ………Know that Feebs’s wearin tha Strap On? i dunno who u were calling a man and who a woman but this was played either way . . Walts verse: dim’s not bright, Ill keep it simple, fuck wordplay He throws his ……. hands in the air at my command ……….. …………………..like it was hearing test Thursday! not hard hitting but a little funny... you get a "haha" for this line. It’s ok…. Dim’s a fan, Ill sit back relax and let him blow Fuck’n hippie….. Keep on truck’n…….so you can finally go tow to tow! a little funny, you get an "lol" and 5/10 hard hitting... the 1-2 punch like tokesters tourney... I know… This expeditions got you quitt’n, as predicted Im a win grand Dimense belongs in middlewait…..in the line at Disneyland! no... walter... i wish i knew you... id smack you for writing this...just no. Hypochrit!....... You’ve lost battles from A2Z, don’t convolute Fuck you pay me?........ This is GTA 3……….now watch me beat this prostitute! you get a "haha" for this lines funniness...almost an Lol... You’re a fag to boot….So Im a take my tim’s to ure temple Checked in late….. I knew I smelled pussy…..now we’re both scentimental! you get a LOL for this lines funniness and it was hittin at a 7 /10 ... I’m dope and your far from me, we’re not connected Allegory ripped ya……… even the people who beat u aren’t respected! that musta hurt his feelings, just a little..nice closer.. Dimense... come harder next week ... Seriously... try. Walter... come harder also... ur verse was pretty good, but.. i need more material to read, yo. from both you hoes. v/ walter. |
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01-30-04, 11:11 PM | #8 | ||||||||
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Personally i thought both verses should've
been alot better from u 2 but I felt this was the only good line in the battle... Quote:
still at the same time Walters was more consistent. Sorry Dimense ur my boy and had u came in this u would've won easy. U cant just count on one line to win. That's rookie stuff, u know that. vote - Walter
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01-30-04, 11:38 PM | #9 | |||||||
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Soon as I drop..Count on Wall Dissapearin like Hide an Seek
Cuz like a 'Shootin Star.. ya 3-0 run in the Triple L was just a lucky streak ^ ^ eh, ok Mw and Tag Champ? U had no hope..without feebles help U didn’t earn Shit..like an inside joke.. ur only kiddin urself ^ ^ eh.. ok attempt at a personal Piece By Piece Im Rippin Walls apart.. Like the one in Berlin Walters just a Pussy.. Reason why this Beef iz Curtainz ^ ^ wasnt feeling this either. Im certain u n Volve have such similar styles ..u gotta admit B/t not skill wise..its cuz like Richard u long for Dick.. ^ ^ nice I liked Lil Queer..ur Shit..Fuck you an that fag crew of Trix DéjÃ- vu..Psst..Silly Faggots….Dicks are for Chicks ^ ^ wasnt feelin it Or Bonifide?there jus Bitches who’ll ride ur Sack Strong So if theres a woman behind every great man…. ………Know that Feebs’s wearin tha Strap On? ^ ^ good closer made me laugh. overall Dimense Ive seen much better from u. I was looking forward for a good showing but I know every week cant be the same, People have lives. Its obvious…. dim’s not bright, Ill keep it simple, fuck wordplay He throws his ……. hands in the air at my command ……….. …………………..like it was hearing test Thursday! ^ ^ ehh ok opener..seen better. It’s ok…. Dim’s a fan, Ill sit back relax and let him blow Fuck’n hippie….. Keep on truck’n…….so you can finally go tow to tow! ^ ^ old concept it was ok. I know… This expeditions got you quitt’n, as predicted Im a win grand Dimense belongs in middlewait…..in the line at Disneyland! ^ ^ ok. leaning towards not good. Hypochrit!....... You’ve lost battles from A2Z, don’t convolute Fuck you pay me?........ This is GTA 3……….now watch me beat this prostitute ^ ^ eh ... You’re a fag to boot….So Im a take my tim’s to ure temple Checked in late….. I knew I smelled pussy…..now we’re both scentimental! ^ ^ pussy lines always interesting..ok I’m dope and your far from me, we’re not connected Allegory ripped ya……… even the people who beat u aren’t respected! ^ ^ straight to the point punch..ok walter also seen better from you. but Dimense had the line of the battle but u beat him on consistensy on every punch. v/Walter
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01-31-04, 02:10 AM | #10 | |||
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Aight battle fellas...good read
Dimense's: Soon as I drop..Count on Wall Dissapearin like Hide an Seek Cuz like a 'Shootin Star.. ya 3-0 run in the Triple L was just a lucky streak ^meh basic..played Mw and Tag Champ? U had no hope..without feebles help U didn’t earn Shit..like an inside joke.. ur only kiddin urself ^Nice first line...2nd line played Piece By Piece Im Rippin Walls apart.. Like the one in Berlin Walters just a Pussy.. Reason why this Beef iz Curtainz ^I liked this one..nice personal/wordplay Im certain u n Volve have such similar styles ..u gotta admit B/t not skill wise..its cuz like Richard u long for Dick.. ^horrible wording..could of been way better Lil Queer..ur Shit..Fuck you an that fag crew of Trix DéjÃ- vu..Psst..Silly Faggots….Dicks are for Chicks ^nope Or Bonifide?there jus Bitches who’ll ride ur Sack Strong So if theres a woman behind every great man…. ………Know that Feebs’s wearin tha Strap On? ^lol nice closer.... Walter's: Its obvious…. dim’s not bright, Ill keep it simple, fuck wordplay He throws his ……. hands in the air at my command ……….. …………………..like it was hearing test Thursday! ^nice..thats some funny shit It’s ok…. Dim’s a fan, Ill sit back relax and let him blow Fuck’n hippie….. Keep on truck’n…….so you can finally go tow to tow! ^nice wordplay I know… This expeditions got you quitt’n, as predicted Im a win grand Dimense belongs in middlewait…..in the line at Disneyland! ^nope..wasn't feeling that at all Hypochrit!....... You’ve lost battles from A2Z, don’t convolute Fuck you pay me?........ This is GTA 3……….now watch me beat this prostitute! ^no..nice try You’re a fag to boot….So Im a take my tim’s to ure temple Checked in late….. I knew I smelled pussy…..now we’re both scentimental! ^lol..nice wordplay again I’m dope and your far from me, we’re not connected Allegory ripped ya……… even the people who beat u aren’t respected! ^nice closer..and personal overall Walter Wall gets this Just a stronger verse..with more concictantancy Dimense had a couple good lines but v/ Walter |
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01-31-04, 05:04 PM | #11 | ||||
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If I have to break this down, I will. However, pretty much everyone else has broken it down and quoted the quotables. Dimense, I was bitched at for using the DIck are for chicks line when I first got back...so you shoulda known better, lol. Anyway, Both of you had some really played, or really corny lines. You both had a couple nice ones though too. Overall, Walt just came more consistent with a better verse.
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01-31-04, 05:11 PM | #12 | ||||||
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Walter: Would you like to retain your MW title or battle for the Heavyweight next week?
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02-01-04, 12:03 AM | #13 | ||||||
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I'll be happy to take HW from you feebs, maybe Ill even try
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02-02-04, 12:11 AM | #14 | ||||||
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walter wins, and is going to lose to me HW title next week. Dimense loses.
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