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06-28-09, 09:46 AM | #1 | |||||||
dope
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life poem
IP: DCE1 0529
spit lyrics cause deverstation with my creation
beat cocks down with rhymes with no hesertation give people insperation der aint noboy doper left u without a rope yer, i ant no friggin joker tired of fuck heads, filling my head up wot can i say i guess i feel just fed up with life,, cuz sometimes it dont look right or shine bright and u feel lost out of sight give urself another chance, you can make it if you have negetive thoughts ur gonna do down the drain kid i went through pain that drove me insane everyday rained, not in clouds but in my brain |
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07-11-09, 01:43 PM | #2 | ||||||
New Jack
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IP: FEEE E76A
what up technique. For the most part, this piece was on point. The flow was definitely there. Piece seemed kinda short, but its was descent none the less...
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