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Old 03-06-06, 05:40 PM   #1
J. Luth
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Gkillah v.s Lady Fiya

IP: FEF6 850C

6-12 lines (first person to check in decides)
House rules
Animate your check-in (script like and shit)
Good luck to both
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Old 03-07-06, 04:09 PM   #2
GKillaz05
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Steppin' up to the stage full or rage...
Time to let my pen come out of its cage...
Walk into the ring with plenty on respect...
Got you scared thinkin this is just a check...

Checkin - in - Goodluck, 10Lines.
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Old 03-08-06, 11:51 AM   #3
~Lady Fiya~
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IP: 7AD2 3C06

Lady grabs the mic from the announcer, "I don't need no introduction!"

*Bell rings*
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Old 03-08-06, 04:47 PM   #4
GKillaz05
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From: CANADA
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My words attack we dont want to hear ya or your whack criteria...
The only way you'd be sick is if I entered your body like bacteria...
No one is fearin' ya, unless they have a phobia of clowns...
Lady's styles like Ronalds...
Only W she will see is if she turn her uniform upsidedown...
I will put out your flame, this crazy lady's just on fire...
Someone should let her know it is time for her to retire...
Im not a liar, everything I say about this bitch is true...
When your tryin' to drop raps you really aint got a clue...
You just put stupid words together and claim you can write...
She thought that a Rap Verse was just the name of this site...
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Old 03-10-06, 10:59 PM   #5
~Lady Fiya~
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From: chi-town
IP: 7AD2 3C06

this nigga from Canada… he must be a rare member
'cause ONLY urban gang-fights result in G-Killahz
the votes against ya country, when I target you'll die
'cause your verses hit.......when it's under Red Bull's-eye
so don't deny shit, your avy warned you not to drop first
look what happened to tha bitch that took a shot at ya verse
You benchwarmer, fuck ya Crew, the NBA won’t respect it
This bitch take TOO many shots…..to keep getting Rejected
Fuck ya autograph shit, talent from you is hard to find
But I applaud ya sig…nature but even that’s from Rey Designs


*Pins GKillahz* REF!!!!
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Old 03-11-06, 01:18 AM   #6
Sean Gunner
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My words attack we dont want to hear ya or your whack criteria...
The only way you'd be sick is if I entered your body like bacteria...
Nope. Not feeling this, no creativity.
No one is fearin' ya, unless they have a phobia of clowns...
Lady's styles like Ronalds...
Only W she will see is if she turn her uniform upsidedown...
Haha, this was decent/good.
I will put out your flame, this crazy lady's just on fire...
Someone should let her know it is time for her to retire...
Nah. Not hitting hard.
Im not a liar, everything I say about this bitch is true...
When your tryin' to drop raps you really aint got a clue...
Not liking this punch either.
You just put stupid words together and claim you can write...
She thought that a Rap Verse was just the name of this site...
Seen this before, not that personal either

You had one good punch, rest were rather lacking. Need to work on your wording and how you transist from bar to bar.

this nigga from Canada… he must be a rare member
'cause ONLY urban gang-fights result in G-Killahz
Ok..Not amazing.
the votes against ya country, when I target you'll die
'cause your verses hit.......when it's under Red Bull's-eye
Haha, nice punch.
so don't deny shit, your avy warned you not to drop first
look what happened to tha bitch that took a shot at ya verse
Eh, avy punches are pretty played.
You benchwarmer, fuck ya Crew, the NBA won’t respect it
This bitch take TOO many shots…..to keep getting Rejected
Eh, not feeling this either.
Fuck ya autograph shit, talent from you is hard to find
But I applaud ya sig…nature but even that’s from Rey Designs
Nice closer

I'm assuming that this was a quick verse cuz I've seen much better from you, it was ok. Some good punches, some bad ones. Just needs wittier wordplay honestly.

So ya...*counts 1..2..3*

*raises Fiya's hand*

v- Fiya
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Old 03-11-06, 09:50 AM   #7
~Lady Fiya~
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Yeah I'm knocking dust off my keyboard I haven't done text in puuhh a year? I think... oh well..

(1-0)
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Old 03-11-06, 11:18 AM   #8
J. Luth
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My words attack we dont want to hear ya or your whack criteria...
The only way you'd be sick is if I entered your body like bacteria...
nah, too basic....... 2/10
No one is fearin' ya, unless they have a phobia of clowns...
Lady's styles like Ronalds...
Only W she will see is if she turn her uniform upsidedown...
not bad, good concept... 5/10 [/b]
I will put out your flame, this crazy lady's just on fire...
Someone should let her know it is time for her to retire...
no, again, no punch, too basic. 2/10
Im not a liar, everything I say about this bitch is true...
When your tryin' to drop raps you really aint got a clue...
nope, again way to basic. no punch at all.. 2/10
You just put stupid words together and claim you can write...
She thought that a Rap Verse was just the name of this site...
it's ok, not bad...... four/10

not really hard hitting man. you've done better. shit was too basic, no hard hitting shit at all. no quotables from this verse. overall: 15/50 (thirty%)

this nigga from Canada… he must be a rare member
'cause ONLY urban gang-fights result in G-Killahz
ok, nice concept........ four/10
the votes against ya country, when I target you'll die
'cause your verses hit.......when it's under Red Bull's-eye
haha, not bad...... four/10
so don't deny shit, your avy warned you not to drop first
look what happened to tha bitch that took a shot at ya verse
good concept, playing off avy, but avy shit kinda played really still ok: four/10
You benchwarmer, fuck ya Crew, the NBA won’t respect it
This bitch take TOO many shots…..to keep getting Rejected
haha, not bad. Liked it kinda..... could of been harder 5/10
Fuck ya autograph shit, talent from you is hard to find
But I applaud ya sig…nature but even that’s from Rey Designs
hahahaha....good personal...... 7/10

overall, decent verse. you've done wayyyyyyyyyyyy better, but this was enough to solidify the match. closer prolly only quotable in this match. overall: 2/50

V/Fiya
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Old 03-11-06, 03:33 PM   #9
Knight SirRebral
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My words attack we dont want to hear ya or your whack criteria...
The only way you'd be sick is if I entered your body like bacteria...
Nope. Not feeling this, no creativity.
No one is fearin' ya, unless they have a phobia of clowns...
Lady's styles like Ronalds...
Only W she will see is if she turn her uniform upsidedown...
Haha, this was decent/good.
I will put out your flame, this crazy lady's just on fire...
Someone should let her know it is time for her to retire...
Nah. Not hitting hard.
Im not a liar, everything I say about this bitch is true...
When your tryin' to drop raps you really aint got a clue...
Not liking this punch either.
You just put stupid words together and claim you can write...
She thought that a Rap Verse was just the name of this site...
Seen this before, not that personal either

You had one good punch, rest were rather lacking. Need to work on your wording and how you transist from bar to bar.

this nigga from Canada… he must be a rare member
'cause ONLY urban gang-fights result in G-Killahz
Ok..Not amazing.
the votes against ya country, when I target you'll die
'cause your verses hit.......when it's under Red Bull's-eye
Haha, nice punch.
so don't deny shit, your avy warned you not to drop first
look what happened to tha bitch that took a shot at ya verse
Eh, avy punches are pretty played.
You benchwarmer, fuck ya Crew, the NBA won’t respect it
This bitch take TOO many shots…..to keep getting Rejected
Eh, not feeling this either.
Fuck ya autograph shit, talent from you is hard to find
But I applaud ya sig…nature but even that’s from Rey Designs
Nice closer

No hate, goin wit fiya on this one, jumps down and attempts to pin fiya
 
Old 03-11-06, 07:47 PM   #10
~Lady Fiya~
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From: chi-town
IP: 7AD2 3C06

(3-0)
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Old 03-12-06, 12:52 AM   #11
JTR
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I'll do it like this:

My words attack we dont want to hear ya or your whack criteria...
The only way you'd be sick is if I entered your body like bacteria...
Wack
No one is fearin' ya, unless they have a phobia of clowns...
Lady's styles like Ronalds...
Only W she will see is if she turn her uniform upsidedown...
Blah
I will put out your flame, this crazy lady's just on fire...
Someone should let her know it is time for her to retire...
Wack
Im not a liar, everything I say about this bitch is true...
When your tryin' to drop raps you really aint got a clue...
Wack
You just put stupid words together and claim you can write...
She thought that a Rap Verse was just the name of this site...
Blah

vs.

this nigga from Canada… he must be a rare member
'cause ONLY urban gang-fights result in G-Killahz
wack
the votes against ya country, when I target you'll die
'cause your verses hit.......when it's under Red Bull's-eye
blah
so don't deny shit, your avy warned you not to drop first
look what happened to tha bitch that took a shot at ya verse
You're complimenting him why?
You benchwarmer, fuck ya Crew, the NBA won’t respect it
This bitch take TOO many shots…..to keep getting Rejected
ok
Fuck ya autograph shit, talent from you is hard to find
But I applaud ya sig…nature but even that’s from Rey Designs
wack

v/Fiya

She came a little better.
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Old 03-12-06, 11:11 AM   #12
J. Luth
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Lady Fiya wins four-nothing. closed
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