![]() |
|
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio ![]() |
|
![]() |
![]() |
||
New to RV
|
IP:
Good verse. See, the rhyme scheme wasn't forced here, and I just read it like a breeze. Unlike some other OM's I've read, I'm glad you didn't make some Shakespearish type verse, as there's nothing wrong with a little simplicity.
Yeah, keeping making stuff in this style.. 9/10. |
||
![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|