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Old 01-02-06, 10:12 PM   #1
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Xplosive 0-1 vs Ill Technique 0-1

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Due Dates
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VERSES DUE Friday 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EST

VOTES DUE Sunday 9:00pm PACIFIC/12:00 Midnight EST

THERE ARE NO CHECK INS

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4 lines - NO SHOWS
14 lines - MINIMUM
Unlimited - MAXIMUM
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Voting

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- You must vote on 2 battles and post the links. For each vote less than 2 you fail to fulfill and post a link to, you will lose 1 vote on your own match. The league can't survive without voting, No excuses.

-No payback votes

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-No hate votes

- If your oponent no shows you are still required to vote on 1 battles. If you don't you will not recive the win.

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Old 01-06-06, 04:21 PM   #2
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“Bullet With Butterfly Wings”


I. Memories

POLICE LOG 11/19/04- COMMANDER J. PERRY
I will keep on fighting, the enemy persists but we must not yield
I will fight for the honor every officer who has lost his life in his field
Because every arrest, every raid, every victory for the police
Will push back the perpetrators of this plague in our streets
And in this time of violence I must concentrate on my most deadly foe
A hardened thug and merciless killer, whose name we do not know
He has flooded the street with innocent blood, and constant terror
We have pursued him for years, but he has never made an error
The hope of our city, the prospects of the future, he seeks to smother
But I do not hate him for this; I hate him for the murder of my brother
Ten years ago, when my brother went to buy food for his newborn son
He was caught in a robbery, killed by a stray bullet from a gun
I was filled with anger, filled with hate, and it stays with me to this day
I have spent the years searching, hoping to make my brother’s killer pay


II. Confrontation
The silence of night is broken by sirens, a shrill and piercing sound
Three police cars pull up in a back alley, in the slums of the town
A pair of officers step out, both overcome by grueling apprehension
Because their feared commander is with them on this routine mission
He hasn’t laughed in almost a decade, hasn’t even cracked a smile
All day and all night he stays in his office, sorting through files
But today something changed in him, and for the first time in years
He insisted on going out in the field, despite his paranoia and fears
All for a seemingly useless lead, on a string of thefts forgotten long ago
Now the officers fear that there is danger, something they don’t know
Both are thinking of their families, their children and their friends
Praying to God that they will see them, even if only one time again
But they also push these thoughts away, knowing it’s a crazy notion
Nothing’s gone wrong, the commander’s only showing his devotion
But all these worries are forgotten, professional training takes control
When in the nearby shadows they see a dead body, slumped in a hole
And even worse is the silhouette behind it, a man with a gleaming gun
He points at them, gesturing for surrender, telling them not to run
Now Commander Perry walks out of his car, and reaches for his boot
Walking towards the killer, he pulls out a gun, and raises it to shoot
But the bandit is even faster, he buries a bullet in the commander’s head
Perry stumbles, and slowly falls, he is doomed… but not yet dead

III. Revenge
As the commander’s pain begins to dull, and blackness sinks into place
Perry looks again at the dead body, and this time sees his brother’s face
And even though his thoughts are jumbled, and his vision can’t be trusted
He knows that the man before him is the killer he has sworn to bring to justice
With all his remaining strength he squeezes on the trigger of his pointed gun
Hoping that, even though his life has been lost, his revenge may still be won
And despite the drips of blood, the drips of sweat, that mingle on his face
Something greater comes from the dying man, just a subtle touch…. of grace
The bullet soars, on the wings of a butterfly, towards its unsuspecting target
Time seems to slow, but the killer knows there is nothing he can do to stop it
And as the fallen commander sees his hated enemy drop dead to the floor
A smile forms on his face, and his heart beats no more.
 
Old 01-07-06, 11:18 AM   #3
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blah, i don like it much, but it aint bad for a no-show verse
 
Old 01-07-06, 11:19 AM   #4
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n i voted on the king solo v. mentalz battle...
 
Old 01-07-06, 01:44 PM   #5
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damn, can i at least still drop...................................
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Old 01-07-06, 03:50 PM   #6
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Beginning

I Wake Up With The Bright Sunlight Reflecting Of My Eyes
A Small Letter Seemed To Waiving In Mid Air By My Side
Opened My Eyes To Full Extent To See My Mother Waiving Her Arm
Telling Me, "It's Ten a.m. Son, Get Up And Turn Off Your Alarm,
Here, You Got This In The Mail, It's From The Police Department"
I Got Up With A Quick Dash To Step My Cold Feet On The Carpet
Grabbed The Letter And Waited For My Mother To Leave To Open It
Broke The Seal, Remembered My Unpaid Tickets, Just Hoping That
It Wasn't A Warrant Statement Explaining My Rights In Hand Cuffs
Since I Had Told My Mom That I Paid The Ticket For Possesion Of A Handgun
But I Didn't, I Just Hid The Ticket Under The Old Mattress
Along With My Ciggarettes, Zig Zags, Porn Magazines And Matches
It's Kind Of Funny But At The Same Time, I Just Don't Wanna Go To Jail
How Will I Make It Rap, Follow My Dreams, If I Don't Get Out On Bail

Lying Begins A Movement
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Old 01-07-06, 04:57 PM   #7
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Beginning
I Wake Up With The Bright Sunlight Reflecting Of My Eyes
A Small Letter Seemed To Waiving In Mid Air By My Side
Opened My Eyes To Full Extent To See My Mother Waiving Her Arm
Telling Me, "It's Ten a.m. Son, Get Up And Turn Off Your Alarm,
Here, You Got This In The Mail, It's From The Police Department"
I Got Up With A Quick Dash To Step My Cold Feet On The Carpet
Grabbed The Letter And Waited For My Mother To Leave To Open It
Broke The Seal, Remembered My Unpaid Tickets, Just Hoping That
It Wasn't A Warrant Statement Explaining My Rights In Hand Cuffs
Since I Had Told My Mom That I Paid The Ticket For Possesion Of A Handgun
But I Didn't, I Just Hid The Ticket Under The Old Mattress
Along With My Ciggarettes, Zig Zags, Porn Magazines And Matches
It's Kind Of Funny But At The Same Time, I Just Don't Wanna Go To Jail
How Will I Make It Rap, Follow My Dreams, If I Don't Get Out On Bail

Lying Begins A Movement
With Silent Creep, I Move Swiftly Down The Stairs With No Sound
Grab The Keys To The Car To Pay The Ticket At The Station Downtown
"Son Were Are You Going So Early, Aren' You Gonna Eat Breakfast"
"Uhhh, No, Mom" I Couldn't Find An Excuse So Say, I Felt Helpless
So I Told Her, " I'm Going To Meet Up With My Friends At Mall
And She Told Me " Do You Want A Ride, I'm Headin For The Town Hall"
I Quickly Told Her I'd Walk, And Dashed Out The Door Into The Street
Down The Station Were I'd Come In Contact With My Defeat

A New Movement
I Walked Up To The Clerk And Jerked Out Those Simple Words To Speak
I Haven't Paid My Ticket And Wanna Know If I Have A Warrant Out On Me
The Lady Told Me To Hold On And I Felt A Barrel Of Sweat Roll Down My Head
Not Knowing What Would Become Of Me, What Waited Up Ahead
I Soon Saw My Mother Walk In The Door, What! How Is This!
What Is This? Why'd My Mom Give The Police Station A Visit
A Cop Came From Behind A Told Me I Was Under Arrest For Failure To Pay
And To My Suprise My Mother Had Came To Drop The Money To Pay
Cause She Hadn't Believed Me But Since I Came Instead Of Her
I Was Placed In A Cell, Wearing Orange, Rolled In The Dirt
My Mom, Crying Pleaded The Cop To Let Me Free, but She Had To Take Process
And Go To Court, Pay Bail, For My Stupidity And Ignorant Nonsense
I Was Set Free And Learned A Lesson That Left Me With A Horrible Vibe
For it's True That The Truth Movement Begane With A Lie


I Posted It Unfinished At First.................lol
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Old 01-08-06, 12:05 PM   #8
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sorry, but i don think that should count....
it says verses due friday, n u were pm'd AND emailed bout it so u shoulda known
normally i'd be ok wit this, but i have my loss cuz i was told this was gon start in january, and then i come back n have a no-show loss
so it really wouldnt be fair for u to get a break on this one.... sorry, but thats how it is
 
Old 01-08-06, 02:59 PM   #9
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Word. Technique, you're out. Sorry, but zero tolerance bro.
 
 


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