Abruptness Is A Shadow That Looms So We Can Defy,
Try To Put Our Thoughts Onto Paper Thinkin Anger May Lie/Lye
In The Eye...Of The Beholder,But You Know As We Get Get Older,
Only Hate And Jealousy Are The Feelings That Get Colder.
Coz For The Thoughts I Put Out On This Ridiculed Site,
Only Bring Out The Best Of Me,Nothings Wrong...Everythins Right.
Take An Insight...Into How Peeps Write Shit Off Tops Of Thier Minds,
Its Not Jus An Opinion,Its Another Soul Searching Line.
Hoping That Other Rappers Will Agree With Them,Feel Their Beliefs.
But If You Let Slip The Wrong Word It Jus Infuels The Hatred Beefs.
So Take Into Account Wen You're Writing A Point Blank Mile,
Is It An Opinion Of The Top Of Your Head,Or A Hate Polluted Keystyle.

pzz...jus gotta think
feedbk

it was a good read... im kinda dillirious right now but i think
towards the end i couldnt really understand, im sick it might be
just me... rhyming was good stucture fit well

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uppin uppin uppin.come on peeps jus some feedbk will be worthy.pz

Only Elvis could write somethin deeper...........nah only kiddin mate, never knew you were so depressed!!!! Do ya wanna collab??? ha ha

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i jus want peeps to luv me man.....*sniffle*
nah i'll jus rape ya wen we get home....oh yeah jimmy