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I Gotta Tell It Like It Is.........................
.............Fuck Ridicule....This Is My Time

*Sitting in a room with my computer, my silence...my gun*

Line By Bar I Extend A Vow...Exprees My Emotions? Teach Me How
....Its Not Jus' The Past...I Can't Even Speak About Now......
....Its A Destined Silence With An Eerie Flow Of Detestment.....
....To Be A Mute Beyond My Time Is Law Breaking Testement....
....I Wish This Was My Mouth...Instead Of A Machines Keyboard...
Tapping One Of My Thoughts Away,Like A Guitar Hitting C-Chord...
...But Gestures Of Silence Can Be Golden..Thats What I Told'Em...
Jus Those Glorified Seconds....Wishing I Could Hold'Em.....
My Minds A Bohemian Rapsody, But Without An End Production
My Mind Teases Mouth....In A Full N Compelling Seduction......
Still No Sound From Vocal Chords...My Innocence Is Complete....
...So Why Would I Write....A Sixteen Bar Defeat?.When I Meet...
......The Creator Of My Flawless Mute..Could I Dispute...?.....
......The Fact He Made Me Silent N Sent Me In To Refute.......
.....See Life Among Tranqulity, But Only In Yourself.......
....Can Kick You Back In Time N Hang You On The Shelf......
.....My Usual Thoughts Take Me To 16 Bars Of Innocence.......
...But Taking My Own Bastard Life Has To Make This Different...
You Can Only Go So Long, Putting Your Thought Onto Paper
.....Everytime I Try To Speak Just Brings Another Caper.....
Wait For A Bitter Silence...As I Begin To Decide My Own Fate
.......How Can I Think Of Myself With Nothing But Hate......
.....See In The End..To End My Silence I Think I Gotta Die.....
.......Its The Craziest Of Ideas But Now I've Gotta Try.....
With My Final Thought On Keyboard,Think 'Bout Who You Are
....Coz My Last Ever Innocence Was Written In This Last Bar....

*Silence has been broken*

TIGHT PEACE YO THIS WAS AND OVERALL GOOD READ NEEDS SOME BRUSHING BUT THAT IS EASY

nice shit brix

wot r these gay ass responses for?....uppun_____________________________________ _________

uppin.........