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Old 01-31-09, 02:42 AM   #1
Its CJ
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Feedback to houdini

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Yo,
Whos Dini? cuz before this i'd never heard of ya
and ya know what?since i dont like ya ill murder ya
Ill strangle ya ass like a girdle does.
and cat dont say i dont know your past...easy call...
it consists of eatin , sleepin, and beatin off
only thing runnin your mouth can get ya is broken jaws
or for your neck a date with the saw
Man i call the calls this bitch cant even point out my flaws,cuz im flawless
if ya did id rip ya apart never get charged like its lawless
niggas know im the rawlest they know what i spit is liquid
your steady calling yourself a man but houdini tricks are for kids,
i was out of your league right from the start
im ruthless man ill tear this nigga apart
and its funny how we got matched
rip you apart so dont get too attached
overmatched like sox in a basket
my pistol will stick you in an urn or a casket
its the cpep boy and you know i be riding with my .38 toy
shove it in your mouth eat up enjoy faggot nigga please
leave home come face to face go back with false teeth
and if diamonds are forever then mark my words
ima shine all the time ill be waiting for you at the finish line
i showed you the warning signs but he dont beleive me
till im in his crib firing shots consistantly, even when hes dead
step over his little cripled body and put 5 more in his head
im gonna take you out this world as quick as you came in
i should save you the embarrisment so just quit before you begin
my bullets hold garlic on the tips
in my oppinion your dad shoulda kept the condom or your moms should of bled.

R.I.P. Zig.
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Old 02-04-09, 08:50 AM   #2
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A Life Of Chryme
 
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i thought this joint was alright, u kinda fell off at the end in my opinion. Pretty good flow and some nice punch lines..loved the name play line shit was fire...idk if u guys got a beef..i just read this single post but seems like u might actuallly rap on the street cuz yah shit was pretty raw. keep doing yur thing man no doubt its fresh.
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