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09-08-05, 12:33 AM | #1 | ||||
Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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Quick verse i wrote at work
IP: 1CEA FD77
I’m lyrically troubled, words too subtle
Beginning to stumble, my world about to crumble I don’t understand, You know the number of sand My life is bland, but You still reach out Your hand Your power is awesome, You make flowers blossom Knowin’ what it would cost ‘em, You decided to dose ‘em In Your blood, washin away all the mud You made me a bud, even though I am a dud Although I’m new, and one of the chosen few Sometimes I don’t have a clue, am I gonna make it through Show me Your wisdom, lead me to Your kingdom Knowing I’ll only reach some, before You come I know I ain’t perfect, Your mercy I don’t deserve it In the end its worth it, cause I am Your servant So as a lamb gone astray, lead me back to stay Cause You are the Life, Truth, and Way, my Savior Son of Yahweh http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2424381
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i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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09-11-05, 02:00 AM | #2 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: 3240 794D
ehhhh... ok I guess... ~> 5/10
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09-14-05, 10:38 AM | #3 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: E716 7F87
its ok.. .5/10 but it went togeather good
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09-14-05, 11:23 AM | #4 | ||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 8A05 210E
yeah i agree wit tha majority on diz 1 it was ight but not good 4/10 ...but jus keep ya day job no hate
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