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04-22-07, 06:55 PM
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The Write Weight
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Pious (1-1) vs Wireless (1-1)
IP: EF6E DF27
Write Away Your Thoughts Week 3 Pious vs Wireless Ok, this week, we have started a Champ and Contender match. Those of you who are not in the champ or contender match, prove yourselves worthy and work your way up. Remember, the prize is 100 dollars, and there are some other prizes as well. If you no-show, you will be booted, from now on that is the rule. Invite your friends as well, help expand our league. Don't leave all the work for the mods to do, we really need your help too! Well, good luck this week guys, keep up the tempo, and outwrite your opponent! This will be the only free verse week you got, so make it good! (Free verse week, write what you want, any topic, just write.) Rules Good Luck! |
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04-23-07, 10:47 PM
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#2
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Flyweight
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IP: D55D 1BC5
check. my topic is:
"The Man Who Jammed the World Down His Sleeve"
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get attached to a rolling stone and you're libel to get crushed.. |
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04-26-07, 06:42 PM
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#3
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Middle Weight
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IP: 26B4 29AF
yeah.................
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accomplishments: being better than you @ life x9. |
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04-27-07, 07:02 PM
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#4
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Flyweight
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IP: D55D 1BC5
The Man Who Jammed The World Down His Sleeve
Act I: This is What Illusion Was Meant to Be. Brushing by the carpet’s edge… David takes his seat at the table’s head. He drums his fingers along the granite top while he watches for his toast to pop and is handed his favorite blend from the freshened coffee pot. “Morning hun!” The words echoed then remained still as the morning mist rapt inside his brain. “Morning.” He staggers back… Before stabbing at a half-eaten yolk, broken by an unusually forceful habitat. His kids sit in silence with their eyes facing down; as ‘OK Computer’ drones through the background, forcing a robotic man to never let his guard down. “Do you believe in magic?” Dave quickly puts illusion to the task and confusion’s brisk notion and jubilant laughs mask the illusion of a prudent past! His children sit and clap with jovial whims ”Daddy bring it back!” they scream as he sits and grins. Act II: Where Life Works it’s Magic. Dave passes the same house on the same road as his blinking lights signal the same fallen souls, that follow him down this solemn role. Impasse imperfections flex their same-knotted route As a pounding vein pumps blood out through his retina… as he slows through school zones to view the same glass-slipper Cinderella. The world turns red, but not to his delight, the same traffic light he barely misses stares into the abyss where he sits and twitches; mouthing ‘Walk.’… to the same pedestrians who always seem to cross. Dave returns to his desk job, listening to his same boss Toss the same sexual innuendos while overusing lost meaning with... ‘Yes… I got the memos…’ Mute to the keyboard’s crescendo mode, Dave descends upon the armchair’s mold. Swiveling around the axis’ - creaking pitch… Punching binary code into his head! He sits in serenity, panicky from his routine realm, killing home remedies of cognac and blue liqueur… While stomaching back the same anxiety pills from the year before! Act III: Who Can Claim Miracles When Jesus Has Been Dead For Years? The addict in an abstract illusion’s portrait with a concave canvas from the lines he’s snorted off the office’s imported marble toilet sits - under the black light’s illumination of his bloodstained wrist! Kissing the bureau’s floral bathroom stall – others can’t help but stop and sneer, at the man who made the world disappear. He drives the same winding forgotten road, proposing an ode to his children as he stops and swerves - returning home to listen to them drone; “Daddy bring it back!” All the while the world bleeds magic ink as his fabrics breathe The air from the kids tugging at… …His sleeve! “Shh Mommy… Daddy’s sleeping now.”
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04-28-07, 01:11 AM
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#5
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The Write Weight
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IP: EF6E DF27
Wireless has been granted an extension of 15 hours.
(No more extensions will be granted until week 5 for Wireless) |
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04-28-07, 08:21 PM
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#6
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Middle Weight
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IP: 26B4 29AF
i'm just too busy.. sorry...
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accomplishments: being better than you @ life x9. |
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04-30-07, 09:58 AM
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#7
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Above Originality
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IP: 9465 0DDF
Pious wins
Heychoo (1-2) Pious (2-1)
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Chryme Syndicate
-Chalkin' Up Your Future |
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