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Old 01-13-07, 12:40 PM   #1
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Yup another beat from your nigga.....peep y'all tryed to make a holy sorta forgiveness/real track here but hope y'all like...

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Old 01-13-07, 01:07 PM   #2
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I'm feeling this shit man, I liked the drum pattern especially..However I do feel that more could've been done to the hook to make it stand out a little more..Try mixing a few things up a bit and make some changes in the verses, like a few breakdowns or something. Overall, not bad man.
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Old 01-13-07, 01:25 PM   #3
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Aight thanks man yeah i thought about changin it up but then thought naww it's a real track it's more about the message....but thanks for the feed.....upinnnnnnnnnn
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Old 01-14-07, 01:22 AM   #4
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yeh man, nice shit.. got that soldier story feel to it. That deep as bass could be slightly dulled down a bit. Hooks ok..

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Old 01-14-07, 09:10 AM   #5
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Aight thanks man.....uppinnnnn
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