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01-08-06, 12:50 PM | #2 | |
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01-11-06, 05:11 PM | #3 |
New to RV
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IP: 9465 0DDF
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01-11-06, 05:36 PM | #4 |
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IP: 9465 0DDF
the life i live....is this not the end of thy world?surely NOT. shocked in a AWW....suprised of the events that can shock. patience a virtue? why if this is true then why do we DIe. lying in my death bed made by my own actions-DEPRIVED. people being racist not caring once at all for the BLACKS. beaten by bats...abused by smacks as the future fades. its not comin back. surely you understand? no not at all had it clicked in my head. like an infected disease the term racists- the ACTION spreads. puerto ricans accused of wrongs doings of MURDER and SLAINS. accused as being villians and criminals-cold blooded heart PAIN. they have no guilt as we suffer and they shine. gettin the easy road. just cuz we suffer and underestimated means we gotta do wat were told. HELL NO fuck that! you can easily forget it, you pendejo, SLAM! now you end up in jail cuz of favoritism. no one givin a DAMN. this outrageous! yes it is. it's no wonder they make HARSH statements. cus we started comin out we are no longer BEING locked in our basements. that time is over. its a new world. yet we live in peace not in revenge. we just the way we do. with a smile cuz we know its not the END. trend its a usual now. whites with blacks. peurto ricans with asians. no more pain being suffered. its time for the WHOLE WORLD AS ! invasion. for if it does still exist. trust me. mark my word ur time will COME. sooner or later for what you've done pain is thy friend. its sprung. no mo' fun..........the END is now and the movement is in thy SESSION. so i thank god for the chance to prove what gave gave wasnt a mistake its a blessin.
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01-12-06, 03:37 AM | #5 | |
Odi et Amo
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IP: B717 C896
There has been a mix-up which I noticed after setting up the battles. Apo Kold will automatically receive the win IF HE DROPS A PIECE OF COURSE! Because ~stylez~ will be replaced by shodown and that account will be kept.
It will be appreciated if you still give feedback to both pieces (when Apo Kold drops)
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01-12-06, 03:45 AM | #6 |
Above Originality
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IP: 9465 0DDF
^^^WORD..........read the sig and the IP's.
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01-13-06, 01:20 PM | #7 | ||
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IP: A1F4 7B78
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So no matter what I drop I win? In that case.. blah fuck bothering as I'm in two other topical leagues. Cold World Drunk as fuck & swaying aggressively I think the funk I sunk has started possessing me. Seeing people sigh & roll their eyes to the sky As I stumble & mumble from side to side. I’ve made a scene now it’s time to leave Smoke makes me cough I think my spleen will bleed. As I feel a cold shiver the night makes me quiver I could make brave a whole army .. .. W/ all the courage in my liver. It’s time to bounce back to my place & stuff kebab meat, chips & biscuits in my face. & 1 here come to the 2 to the 3 to the 4 The world is as cold as..? .. A pretty cold floor. In my underpants I consider the darkness & what exactly the scientific definition of what a fart is. Ring my chick as I want to bone her & show her how my will grows when I have a boner. Sorry I'm lazy.. hope you understand the inner meaning of the kebab meat line .. this is some deep shit. |
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01-14-06, 02:11 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
as short and lazy as apo's was, i still would've voted for him...for this reason alone, creativity...styles, yours wasn't really interesting because that direction has been done, plus, i dislike the way you structure some of your lines, closer is a good example, it runs on...i like reading pieces with a good flow, doesn't matter if the lines are long, but it has to flow, word, try to be a little more creative with your writing though, not bad
highlight of the battle: As I feel a cold shiver the night makes me quiver I could make brave a whole army .. .. W/ all the courage in my liver. word, apo, good stuff, look forward to reading more of yours
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01-14-06, 09:03 PM | #9 | ||
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IP: A1F4 7B78
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LOL thansk Dra. For the exceptio of that line I blahed the rest in a random fashion as I get the win regardless. Hopefully next week I'll be less lazy. I signed up to one too many leagues & DQ telling me I win regardless as long as I post was quite a help as I hadn't got time for all of them. Next week you'll have my undivided attention & I'll write seriously. |
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01-15-06, 05:06 PM | #10 | |
Odi et Amo
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IP: C9A2 1C80
Closed
Apo Kold receives win
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