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04-05-07, 11:59 PM
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The Write Weight
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Mariah vs. Professor
IP: EF6E DF27
Preseason Match-up! Mariah vs Professor Ok, This is a preseason match-up. This battle will not be counted on your regular season record. This is just a battle to get things started up a little before the actual season starts, and we would like it if you could show, but if you can't just let us know in your thread. Checks Due: Friday April 611:59 P.M. CST Verses Due: Saturday April 7, 11:59 P.M. CST Voting Ends: Sunday April 8, 11:59 P.M. CST Selection of Topics Rules & Regulations Good Luck to Both! |
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04-06-07, 03:13 AM
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Lyrical
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IP: CDC3 1DCB
Fuck you bitches, giving me her
EDIT: MUAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHHAHAAHHAHAAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAX HAHAHAXHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH  ^^ find the diffrent letter!
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hi Last edited by 2nd. Nature : 04-06-07 at 04:10 AM. |
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04-06-07, 06:45 PM
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Championette
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IP: CDC3 1DCB
yeah wtf? the letter is X btw
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04-07-07, 06:03 AM
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Championette
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IP: CDC3 1DCB
Life is half spent before we know what it is -George Herbert-  The baroness wades, the water is too cold While clarinets play their softer cued notes Shrewed hopes, surpassed by worse pain Disguising the hurt, masking up her face Dead in a worse place, a jungle of emotion Love, lust, greed; all a trouble with devotion Her life will grow, give it time to command Let this angel free, her wings die to expand She reaches for the heavens, Earth has fell Even with false facts, she can learn it well Burn in hell, you fascist creeps, leave her be This sucidal embodiment of our Lady Peace Torch in one hand, the other holds the Word We condemn man and yet we mold the Earth So ask me a question, we live this propriety Freedom isn't symbolized by statues ...freedom kills this society |
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04-07-07, 06:55 AM
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Lyrical
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IP: CDC3 1DCB
 It's all in fun... I acknowledge non-sense, this game means nothing The track is just obvious and this train leaves bluffing Mainly stuffing, my mind elates with that of a smoker My heart pumps wild like it was a stack full of jokers I'd fold, but I can't, there's one life to live and it's now I planned on leaving here rich, quitting won't help out But I'll let this go, I'm not the one to destine my fate I've been given a hand, I won't be testin my strength  It's all in fun, but why not push it... I tap down on the table, check, see what he does He won't want to risk it, so he'll raise with a bluff I press my luck hard, I would really like to finish With some green in my pocket, I'm in it to win it So I'm all in because I'm such a hardcore bidder After a glance at my cards, can't be much better I am confident I got this, if not, no big deal friends Because this round's over, but they will deal again  It's all in fun, but I will die to win... I see that I may have what I need, my limit broadens No need to contemplate and so my bitching softens I'll roulette this match too, I can win with those odds And I see there's no need to play with most thoughts I'll postpone the agony, and make my opponent shiver And pretend my hand has no appeal, 'til after the river So let's play, game on, 1 bullet, I spin it around then But I fold and pull it back...hitting the ground...DEAD  But what did death do Just lay me to down rest....and? The gun was my rescue Later realizing I had the best hand
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04-07-07, 07:09 AM
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Above Originality
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IP: AE5E 9EF1
well mariah knows who ima gonna vote for....
brandon- your verse was cool man.. i liked it was creative and the pic thing you whore...lol..couldnt think of another way?!...lmfao anyways the content was cool though sometimes the story i was just not feeling it cus sometimes it felt sorta...lika....FORCED nah mean... your wording though is just throwin g me off cus it really isnt clikcing in some areas man damn...but your emotion was there aswell as your own vocab assortion. Mariah- i liked your piece more cus it was just more eye catching was just more better...worded better and the content was good aswell as your vocabulary kept on pouring it was short..YES fuckin short but writing is writing and how ever you want it and think it may eefect its yours...lol.. but i liked your dorp more cus of your skill of writing with a story and wording and assorting your vocan so it wouldnt just feel forced it seemed rush yes,,,but it was a nice enough piece to take this win from me.... both did well though....and ugh both you fuckers are SEXY!
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-Chalkin' Up Your Future Last edited by 2nd. Nature : 04-08-07 at 05:41 PM. |
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