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12-07-07, 01:29 PM | #1 | ||||||
New Jack
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life of death/ get it how u live it
IP: 0265 319C
life reflects on the way you make it,
so if you hate it , it reflects on hatred im in the dark but ima shine cause i got faith ima make it the bitter life i know how it tasted i came in this world with nothin so i aint leaving naked im a hustla not a g so i aint gotta fake it fuck a g life im just tryna hustle lifting pound so i got a lil muscle im the best and if you say otherwise your face can hit on my knuckle im dead but not talkin in the physical, in the spiritual, this teenage life im livin is typical if i revived from this life of death it would be a miracle on my own cause i aint got nobody i watch life pass like a bitch with nobody im on my grind but with no dick i spit so sick like i got a fever i spit like a heater but my life is in a shadow like im standing behind a beaver aint nothin to it either ~~~~~~~ Get it how u live it ~~~~~~~~~~ i get it how i live it so im hustlin grams you cant even hold back my flow in a fuckin dam my life is like got fuckin damn!! worried about the pigs like a fuckin ham ~~~~~~~``2 B Continued ~~~~~~~~~ http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...d=1#post3195479 http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...d=1#post3195481 Last edited by wiley d : 12-13-07 at 04:09 PM. |
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12-13-07, 04:10 PM | #2 | ||||||
New Jack
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IP: 7EAF 257F
can i get some feedback
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12-14-07, 08:24 PM | #3 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 2326 5166
Nice do some more! I want to see how you improve!
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12-17-07, 12:11 AM | #4 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: E943 6C67
man this shit was igght hopefully it diddnt take much of yout time tho...
overall it was kinda plain diddnt like the ham line that shit was weird..lackin any origanality or howeve u spell it...sik like a fever is hella sum 98 type shit grow up elevate keep workin hard at it the sky is the limit.....dont quit Last edited by MoutH : 12-17-07 at 12:13 AM. Reason: 4got sumtin |
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