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03-04-08, 07:26 AM | #1 | ||||||
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View from my window (Collab)
IP: 1FB0 96A9
A collaboration by Got Soul? © & Tu
Got Soul? ©: verse 1 Tu:verse 2 ..........I stare out the window and sit at the..........
Four legged desk I write my rhyme deeply on he swore he the best, I like to lie, it keeps me goin light shimmers in the curtains, with a quick flicker lifes dimmer than the burden that sticks with her her soul to me is a beauty, she way more than a ten the goal for her is duty, she'll do what for, for a ten?! I swarm with the pen, glance out the window she on the floor for the men, god damn its a sin yo the broken curbside coincides with the worst lifes the hope an hurt hides when the first arrives alcoholic thirst derives when the hurst that drives deaths earthless wife to an unforseen perfect life months have seen perverts arive, refered for night surfaced strife, 40 ounces, you thirsty right? not purchased right, you snort detergant lines Damn as I close the window, for some silent evening rest I roll some indo I know these violent streets be the best I see the masses playing savage captured havoc symmetry as I match the path of rational to tragically obscene picture perfect antiquated with a past I never seen addict tracks an avid practice for this patch of misery making pacts inside a passage peddle packs amphetamines pavement cracks and paper packets kicking cans and magazines capture candid candor carnage cops and caps reality corner cats and battle raps attacking actors at the scene making macs of pragmatists encapsulated in a beat bitches breaking backs of bastards claiming cash at seventeen fuck the voices in your head I hear them actual screams immaculate teams are clappin hands the back of a beam buck imposters pay the piper purging pacifists clean painting portraits cordon corpses chalk it up to poverty picking pockets from a prophet Pac is laid in memory and it seems these post apocalyptic verses never leave so I seek the serpent service sensomilia dreams expediently some stars a street an ambulance speeds defeating gravity once anarchy then gradually ..........…..peace...........
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03-04-08, 01:39 PM | #2 | |||||
Herb
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IP: CE76 E868
aiyo i liked the concept of this peice for sure first drop was ight couple lines that were really kinda blah but still a nice peice to read...as for the secon drop that shit was hot great vocab choice and a really good flow i liked that shit main keep that shit poppin overall good collab but i liked tu's shit better one fella's
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03-04-08, 06:48 PM | #3 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 2998 9024
Thanks for the feed.
got damn my verse is shit Meh, its all for a good cause. |
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03-04-08, 08:02 PM | #4 | |||||
Herb
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IP: CE76 E868
nah its not shit the second drop was just more dope bro that's all no hate all toghether it was a dope drop...fuk it shit happens
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03-04-08, 08:50 PM | #5 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 2998 9024
lol, im not stressing bro. TU is a talented writer.
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