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That was a real deep piece yo! I liked the hook too. Theres a few spots here and there that need a lil work, but really its iight i wouldn't change it. drop some more shit yo, i like readin it!!
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thank...u...................uppin for more feedback............
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IP: 42E8 5523
im loving this man, just spat out the verses to Cold As Ice instrumental, sounds ace mate. liking the rythim but i think ur choruses need some work, fat rhyme though mate, just trying to stick to feedback rules :P
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IP: 5043 32F4
pretty good drop liked your stucture and your hook was good...but try to use more vocab to give all that emotion you used flavour...you know i hope you do..lol...but this was a good drop....i wouldnt mind a collab about something emotioanl with you...it would be good you should pm me or hit me on aim or msn w/e you got or shit w/e....but good drop i really like dyour flow and multis a few bad lines but i liked most of them...good job..
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ups yall......and thanks for all the feedback..................
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uppin.........bringing back my old shit
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