sup, 20. 15 characters...

sup man
20's alot
if i drop 1st it'll be closer to 16

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You're a fucking loser & thats why I make it clear when flowing
I'm never taking back words... like the direction your text career is going...
You gotta know who owns you when you write lines
its not unselfish concern.. in verses you just like your selfless than you like mine
every writer has great days, the lines come natural, and a sonning is sound
when u feel something dope coming on, ur opponents verse is coming around
I've meant to ask how your inflated record is meant to last...
talking about you being good is always exciting... intense is past...
u winning? you're trash which is why I wonder how to contort his hunches
I dont want to force the issue.. I mean Ive witnessed how u force ur punches

Go back to ya site, cuz here on RV you been thru
Be proud to champ a league more people sign OUt then Into
Fucking loser, he got no Friends..........believe me
He'll make Monica and Rachel stop hanging with Feebie
When I retire you...get no benefits, bet it happen
Cuz pension describes the weapon...AND the spot U getting stabbed in
And relationships this geek should prevent it
Funny how your names Mind but its your girls brains that keeps our attention
Aint you like forty-nine? bitch I'll fucking leave your jaw behind
And put you in chairs...faster than Nick Fletcher storylines

You're a fucking loser & thats why I make it clear when flowing
I'm never taking back words... like the direction your text career is going...
You gotta know who owns you when you write lines
its not unselfish concern.. in verses you just like your selfless than you like mine

vs.

Go back to ya site, cuz here on RV you been thru
Be proud to champ a league more people sign OUt then Into
Fucking loser, he got no Friends..........believe me
He'll make Monica and Rachel stop hanging with Feebie
And relationships this geek should prevent it
Funny how your names Mind but its your girls brains that keeps our attention


vote. N tav, was feeling his wordplay a little bit better, feeb's verse just seemed to generic, tav came with some decent personals, had me laughing..

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My Lines Are ILL yo

four votes done ill edit them in later

You gotta know who owns you when you write lines
its not unselfish concern.. in verses you just like your selfless than you like mine
I've meant to ask how your inflated record is meant to last...
talking about you being good is always exciting... intense is past...

vs.

Fucking loser, he got no Friends..........believe me
He'll make Monica and Rachel stop hanging with Feebie
When I retire you...get no benefits, bet it happen
Cuz pension describes the weapon...AND the spot U getting stabbed in
Aint you like forty-nine? bitch I'll fucking leave your jaw behind
And put you in chairs...faster than Nick Fletcher storylines


this was a cool read. feebles opener didn't work for me. his 'selfless' line was hot, and while the 'past tense' line read a bit awkward i still liked it. the rest of his verse was a bit listless tho. taverez had the 'feebie' nameplay which was the punch of the battle definitely, and i felt he was more consistent so i've got him taking this one.


v/ n.taverez.

N.Tavarez-Fucking loser, he got no Friends..........believe me
He'll make Monica and Rachel stop hanging with Feebie
And relationships this geek should prevent it
Funny how your names Mind but its your girls brains that keeps our attention

Feeble Minded-every writer has great days, the lines come natural, and a sonning is sound
when u feel something dope coming on, ur opponents verse is coming around

This was a pretty str8 battle here both cats could have come a lil better , I got N. takin wit his 2 quotes they were both nice

Vote- N. Tavarez

*insert sway here*

You're a fucking loser & thats why I make it clear when flowing
I'm never taking back words... like the direction your text career is going...
You gotta know who owns you when you write lines
its not unselfish concern.. in verses you just like your selfless than you like mine
u winning? you're trash which is why I wonder how to contort his hunches
I dont want to force the issue.. I mean Ive witnessed how u force ur punches

vs

Go back to ya site, cuz here on RV you been thru
Be proud to champ a league more people sign OUt then Into
Fucking loser, he got no Friends..........believe me
He'll make Monica and Rachel stop hanging with Feebie
When I retire you...get no benefits, bet it happen
Cuz pension describes the weapon...AND the spot U getting stabbed in
And relationships this geek should prevent it
Funny how your names Mind but its your girls brains that keeps our attention

I got N.Tav taking this on more creative n entertaining lines...His verse also made more sense and was more consistant as well. Feebs came in tight but lost steam as he whent by...some of his shit didn't make sense or just str8 out wasn't a punch at all making it hard to quote. His opener and 2nd bar were both tight though, He would have had a better chance of getting my vote if he would have stayed consistant after these lines though.

V/ N. Tavarez

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..