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Old 03-11-09, 01:45 PM   #1
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Old 03-11-09, 08:43 PM   #2
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i like it, but i feel you need to layer the hook more....thats all
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Old 03-11-09, 09:50 PM   #3
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Old 03-12-09, 06:00 PM   #4
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graize...............
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Old 03-12-09, 06:32 PM   #5
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First off I personally don't like your voice..but I'll leave feed because that'd be nice.

The first voice is real cool..I like the beat and I like how you flow on it. The chorus sounds really weird. Your voice sounds a bit too wiry if that makes sense. There's no body to it. Maybe layer it a bit more. Other than that the song is cool.
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Old 03-12-09, 09:49 PM   #6
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yeah. yeah.,,,,
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Old 03-19-09, 10:44 PM   #7
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lol this was one of your nicer tracks, first verse was really dope, chorus is catchy i liked it, didnt like the second verse in the begining as much as the others, that space ship and tighter then your pants is shit was cool though

good shit man keep it up
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