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Old 12-14-05, 10:59 PM   #16
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man...you know where its at duece. i really enjoyed this track. i liked being able to hear you on some shit other than a gangster beat, on a deep level you know. cant wait to here this new one you working on. bout man, i wanna come up and hit up some shit later. ill talk to you about all this later...
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Old 12-14-05, 11:45 PM   #17
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ok typing as I listen....whoa u upped ya quality seriously....beat is simplistic but tight...ok so far the first verse is good but repetitve..need to switch up the flow some....delivery is koo intially but is also repetitve...I was starting to lose interest then u was saved by hook coming up...hooks mixing is koo but coulda been alil better...the melody of hook was good but coulda been stronger to be more infectous...ok second verse....again good but u coem back wit the same flow....u are really relying on those dubs to keep ua flow interesting...the delivery coulda had more subtle animation IMO....overall not a bad track, could use sum polishing but beat is strong hook is good enuff so that'd mask alot of the flaws...so you'd be able to get away wit this one but still coulda been better but all in all good shit..keep dropping...1
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Old 12-15-05, 03:36 AM   #18
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Old 12-15-05, 11:16 PM   #19
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