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09-11-06, 06:25 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Dervla vs Po' Wit
IP: 5285 DC82
Picture Battle
Check in due: 9/14 Verse due 9/20 Line limit open: Last edited by Peace : 09-11-06 at 11:49 PM. |
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09-11-06, 09:11 PM | #2 | |||||
All these Dead Presidents
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IP: 87EB D237
i'm there. .
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09-11-06, 09:58 PM | #3 | |||
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: A699 7383
Wow..I have so much time, Lol @ dates. Check.
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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09-11-06, 10:34 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 566B 1959
shhh, dates will be edited soon. But yeh, you will have just under a week to do verses.
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09-12-06, 12:12 AM | #5 | |||||
All these Dead Presidents
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IP: 87EB D237
good luck lola..
it looks like you use the closest technique and structure in topicals that I do (being a more poetic structure), so this oughta be good. See you in 6 days or so.
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09-20-06, 11:34 PM | #6 | |||
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 6370 559E
Slave to the Gov.
The glisten in his eyes making me smile, while he's controlling the wheel-riding down the Nile mother nature tears splashing on the hard concrete of the streets and I can feel in my stomach his lil feet’s. any minute this baby will be eating the fruits of life, with full of love and guidance till the day he dies. Can't wait to see his eye's, I hope its like his father's blue'ish like the skies-symbolizes that he'll go farther. But the dead end comes to quick-the brakes hit, horn blaring but it doesn't helps-Metals starts to split in my mind, I'm foreshadowing the pain I'm going to feel, my skin is lynching, I'm turning to an banana that’s peel(ing) off its outer layer of life, every inch of it leaks in red, finally the catastrophe stops, my vision is a blur, I c this head that’s limping against the steering wheel-tears starts 2 shed. My mind quickly jumps, the pulse in my veins pops out, "the baby!", I grip my stomach with so much force- I shout "Good God the baby!". Sirens blaring near and voices yelling, "Ma'am we're going to get you through-" a voice interrupts my hearing "Bartholomew" goose bumps takes over my arm "Baby-Bartholomew" Laying on the stretcher-mother nature tears hitting my wounds, and I pull my chin up, I see my husband standing in the wetness dew. *Passes out* This is the Half of my verse, and I know it don't follows the Topic, BUT if Peace grants Po'It a extension then I'll post my other half tomorrow and it'll make sense. Trust me. If Not, then I'll still post my other half..I'm tired, I got school so yeah. Peace.
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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09-21-06, 03:44 PM | #7 | |||||
All these Dead Presidents
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IP: A41E 9E9E
^ She gets the win.
I slept on this cause' we had so long and the last two days my schedule was strewn tighter than a virgins vagina. There was no way in hell I was going to get on yesterday and the day before that I had only had half of what I wanted so I didn't finish it thinking I could squeeze in some time at the end of the day. But I couldn't so, This goes to lola for showing.
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09-21-06, 07:19 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 5285 DC82
Dervla wins.
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09-21-06, 09:59 PM | #9 | |||||
~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: 6168 7863
v/ My Girl Derv
AI Fucka's
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