Voted For: Paranoid

Alright..

Revalation
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Flow:Your flow is aight you really gotta work on it you'll get better at it as u start rapping more and more..and If i was you i would hold back on buying new equptment till you have decent flow and delivery cuz it'd be useless too have that mic with what ur workin with right now....:5/10

Pressense:Your pressense is aight for you just beginning somthing you also have too work on...cuz you sound like you are forcing it...but keep workin on it...5.7/10

Emotion:You actually have decent emotion just it wont play a role on ur audio untill you get ur flow and pressense down better it'll all happen over time:6/10

Lyrics:Your lyrics are good of course you came outta being straight text so of course your gonna have good lyrics:8/10

Overall:Overall this was a not so good track....you gotta work on your flow and what not fam...cuz it really didn't come on that great:5.7/10

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Paranoid
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Flow:you have a better flow then rev no doubt BUT you dont have it polished yet but over time it will get better overall it was just decent:6/10

Pressense:Your pressene was alright.....nothin too special too laid back type of style for me.......so i wasn't really feelin it on this u need too boost this too get peoples attention cuz even most mellow rappers normally have a good pressense that can attract listeners keep tryin tho:5/10

Emotion:your emotion is ur biggest weakness fam....this is wat u lack on every song and u wont be able 2 get people attention till you really start boosting this right here....keep tryin tho...:5/10

Lyrics:Your lyrics are alright overall there not good but there not great..overall they were just decent:7/10

Overall:YOU DID drop better then rev.....u made it up with ur flow.....if u didn't have any flow Rev woulda taken this battle...but overall u did do better:6/10


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my vote goes too Paranoid

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Voted For: Paranoid

I like the fact that this is a topical battle:

paranoid...im feelin the beat choice..flow is kl throughout the track..it seems a lil robotic sumtimes n u stutter a lil..i see u workin on that emotion its nice....lyrics are very very nice...flow stays nice..however like i said its a bit robotic...but its comin dawg def a improvement since last time...hook is very nice ure best bit of the track..last verse...u shud write to add more words in each line cos its like u say summin n stop and continue..u dont wana do that alot..3rd verse is a bit better...

Rev:

listenin..lol ure voice sounds like sum american preacher from the suburbans..lol im playin..quality lets u down a huge amount..
lyrics are nice..i like the emotion..u got th energy but it seems ure emotion gettin over ure flow cos its off...presence is aitie...lyrics are koo u wrote better to it but it didnt flow..beat is was koo..lyrics koo..flow was offf...work on it cuz it was a decent listen..

v/paranoid...

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