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Old 10-31-04, 07:27 PM   #1
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Triple_N 'vs' CarsonJetX2 'vs' Archeologist

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.Final So Come Your Dopest Ever.
.Winner Is Text Champ Of RV.
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Old 11-01-04, 08:58 PM   #2
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Check Goodluck lads.
Hope you get time to show N.
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Old 11-01-04, 09:54 PM   #3
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^lmao.

Checked in.
If your were better, you'd be in.
Your not.

And...Im makin a suggestion.
Black List Sdizzle from this battle.
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Old 11-03-04, 12:08 AM   #4
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carsonjst wins by no show triples on tour lol

And What about me?
Come on Carson still diss him in your 20 aswell as me.
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Old 11-03-04, 08:08 PM   #5
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Arch.

Arch, I wanna know. How much u pay for that quote from Yvonne...
Come on....Seriously, RB still hasn't noticed that Rascal's gone-
You lack the bronze, Son, ya drops...I peepd, They simply Bore me.
Let's face the facts...Your only here because you run the tourney
The champion?...of what?...shit your worste than S-Dizzle
Shit your skill must be hiding right next to Iraq's missles'
Arch' you get the gist'?...Finals? you jus don't belong in this.
I mean...I'm audio...shit...an ur not even on Spul's top 20 list
Break the back bone, flip the torso...and leave u cryin out in morse code-
Ripped-so-forcefull, This archeoligist aint so Resourcefull

Triple N.

No Show
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Old 11-04-04, 09:57 PM   #6
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Triple N = No Show.

CarsonJetX2

Your wack Carson, i'll bring war to This fag cause he raps soft..
See "Cars" like the Karate Kid..
...When he hears me Wax On, he Whacks Off..
Gotta spit wild, so ripping his inner child, bursting his bubble..
Threw Globes at this bitch, and put him in a World full or Trouble..
Carson tryed to run TLL but Rb kidss brought him down witha fall..
Your girls on my dick, tryna Gimme Delight like she's Sean paul..
..This Fag needs a lesson on how to write and i'll teach..
Then beat him with some Candy, to show him revenge is sweet..
"Old Navy Hoody And A Backwards Cap." What The End Said..
Carson's just a Homo gansta. Click and See how Carson gives head..

Blah like it or not i had fun in this tourny.
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Old 11-05-04, 03:17 PM   #7
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Carson--
Arch, I wanna know. How much u pay for that quote from Yvonne...
Come on....Seriously, RB still hasn't noticed that Rascal's gone-
good personal...
You lack the bronze, Son, ya drops...I peepd, They simply Bore me.
Let's face the facts...Your only here because you run the tourney
ehh...decent i guess
The champion?...of what?...shit your worste than S-Dizzle
Shit your skill must be hiding right next to Iraq's missles'
....nah
Arch' you get the gist'?...Finals? you jus don't belong in this.
I mean...I'm audio...shit...an ur not even on Spul's top 20 list
okay personal
Break the back bone, flip the torso...and leave u cryin out in morse code-
Ripped-so-forcefull, This archeoligist aint so Resourcefull
okay nameplay....but meh closer

Carson, not a bad verse IMO...but then again, not a good verse considerin that this is the final battle...i thought u had a couple of holes here n there, but overall, u were consistent wit decent personals/punches...

Arch--
Your wack Carson, i'll bring war to This fag cause he raps soft..
See "Cars" like the Karate Kid..
...When he hears me Wax On, he Whacks Off..
...ehh
Gotta spit wild, so ripping his inner child, bursting his bubble..
Threw Globes at this bitch, and put him in a World full or Trouble..
lol...decent
Carson tryed to run TLL but Rb kidss brought him down witha fall..
Your girls on my dick, tryna Gimme Delight like she's Sean paul..
nah
..This Fag needs a lesson on how to write and i'll teach..
Then beat him with some Candy, to show him revenge is sweet..
hmm...i think it coulda been worded better...good concept tho
"Old Navy Hoody And A Backwards Cap." What The End Said..
Carson's just a Homo gansta. Click and See how Carson gives head..
blah closer...

Arch, i really think u coulda done better...i thought both verses had a lot of filler/below average lines, but u had more, so u didnt have enough heat here to outshine Carson's verse....

V/ Carson, for more consistency and an overall better verse...
 
Old 11-05-04, 05:15 PM   #8
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god damn you bastards, this was a dissapointment

arch, i question the origins of your verse because you have NEVER used that style before and it seems strange that you would use a style switch in the fuckin finals =/

Carson you had a average verse, was better than most on this site, arch your verse was ehh, carson had much harder punches than arch overall and thats why

v/carson
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Old 11-05-04, 09:59 PM   #9
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are u seriouse?

Im up 2-0? Wow.
No offense Arch...didn't read your's...
But you should have beaten what I dropped.

Not tryna be rude. Or cover up my shitty text skills.
But I did basicly hand this one to you. WTF?
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Old 11-06-04, 09:57 AM   #10
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carson took this....liked the 2nd bar and the 3rd bar alot but he was just more consistent throughout wiv beta punches n very gud flow...gud personal to...

arch - you came o.k wiv some nice funny punches n personals but a felt quite a few of them were a bit played like the globe punch and the candy punch, not really feelin them but nice drop also...

kinda weak for the final but not bad...

v/carson

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Old 11-07-04, 07:22 PM   #11
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triple N is on a tour with his crew outside rv tell december so kool it on your nuts wiggas
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Old 11-08-04, 10:03 AM   #12
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HMMMM......I don't really see how Carson won this. I mean, he even said how weak he came. Arch had a few nice lines in there that should have given this to him hands down......oh well, ya win some, ya lose some
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Old 11-09-04, 04:36 PM   #13
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/\/\ I actually just read em both, and I pretty much agree with the votes so far... both had stand out lines but I think carsons was better as a whole peice. nice from both-- I aint votin, but I enjoyed this little jumpoff.
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Old 11-10-04, 03:32 PM   #14
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.CarsonJetX2 Wins Writers Block2.
.Archeologist got a well deserved 2nd .
.Triple N uh at you.
.Writers Block 3 will be up in the coming weeks.
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