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Old 02-23-09, 02:31 PM   #1
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Old 02-23-09, 03:06 PM   #2
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Old 02-23-09, 10:26 PM   #3
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sure thing......
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Old 02-25-09, 10:28 PM   #4
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Your a fucking faggot.


The sites kind of inactive, so consider me a new host
Cuz I'll leave JTR so dead..
.. even the forum will seem flooded with posts
You don't know me? I'm Kryptic dude, so drop ya pen
Cuz i'll leave ya with notions.. and you'll NEVER walk again
Civil fucked up on matchups, i'm stuck slappin a con
Cuz when I optical you everyone will -c- where you belong
You want my shit, but ya can't have it bitch respect my phonics
Because my dictions JTR..
... and any other fag who tries hoppin on it
RV's ya life, shit's gonna get fucked up when ya lose..
I hope ya survive the jump...
... but thats a big fall from ya roof


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Old 02-27-09, 03:04 PM   #5
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Bitch why start shit? Call me a faggot but you're gettin ripped regardless
Cuz the only time Alphabet gave anyone trouble was in Kindergarden
I spit good rap, your wordplay is shit and you should be shook man
With Pun's that are so fucking wack they make Terror Squad look bad
My wordplay's ill; I connect with homophones when I say phat rhymes
You only connect with homophones when you call gay chat lines
Alpha aint iller he a groupie, and his skills aren't with the cuties
I know what you did last summer
...chased screaming girls but never got em like the killer from the movie
Only girl you've ever gotten is a WHORE, and that hoe isn't pricey
But wait, cuz talk is cheap.... well then again, so is ya wifey

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Old 02-27-09, 06:18 PM   #6
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The sites kind of inactive, so consider me a new host
Cuz I'll leave JTR so dead..
.. even the forum will seem flooded with posts
na, not hitting him
You don't know me? I'm Kryptic dude, so drop ya pen
Cuz i'll leave ya with notions.. and you'll NEVER walk again
this was ok
Civil fucked up on matchups, i'm stuck slappin a con
Cuz when I optical you everyone will -c- where you belong
not feeling it
You want my shit, but ya can't have it bitch respect my phonics
Because my dictions JTR..
... and any other fag who tries hoppin on it
it was ok could have been worded better
RV's ya life, shit's gonna get fucked up when ya lose..
I hope ya survive the jump...
... but thats a big fall from ya roof
na weak






Bitch why start shit? Call me a faggot but you're gettin ripped regardless
Cuz the only time Alphabet gave anyone trouble was in Kindergarden
ok
I spit good rap, your wordplay is shit and you should be shook man
With Pun's that are so fucking wack they make Terror Squad look bad
lol, concept was ok but could have been delivered better
My wordplay's ill; I connect with homophones when I say phat rhymes
You only connect with homophones when you call gay chat lines
ok, wording was a bit weak
Alpha aint iller he a groupie, and his skills aren't with the cuties
I know what you did last summer
...chased screaming girls but never got em like the killer from the movie
na
Only girl you've ever gotten is a WHORE, and that hoe isn't pricey
But wait, cuz talk is cheap.... well then again, so is ya wifey
na



this was a close battle, both had some htting lines, JTR didn't come as creative with his punches though, Ima say alpa by a bit
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Old 02-27-09, 06:40 PM   #7
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Alpha


The sites kind of inactive, so consider me a new host
Cuz I'll leave JTR so dead..
.. even the forum will seem flooded with posts
No.
You don't know me? I'm Kryptic dude, so drop ya pen
Cuz i'll leave ya with notions.. and you'll NEVER walk again
I liked this.
Civil fucked up on matchups, i'm stuck slappin a con
Cuz when I optical you everyone will -c- where you belong
Lol, cool
You want my shit, but ya can't have it bitch respect my phonics
Because my dictions JTR..
... and any other fag who tries hoppin on it
No
RV's ya life, shit's gonna get fucked up when ya lose..
I hope ya survive the jump...
... but thats a big fall from ya roof
eh.


JTR


Bitch why start shit? Call me a faggot but you're gettin ripped regardless
Cuz the only time Alphabet gave anyone trouble was in Kindergarden
Funny as shit. a lil played against him. but worded perfectly. nice
I spit good rap, your wordplay is shit and you should be shook man
With Pun's that are so fucking wack they make Terror Squad look bad
Ok.
My wordplay's ill; I connect with homophones when I say phat rhymes
You only connect with homophones when you call gay chat lines
No.
Alpha aint iller he a groupie, and his skills aren't with the cuties
I know what you did last summer
...chased screaming girls but never got em like the killer from the movie
No
Only girl you've ever gotten is a WHORE, and that hoe isn't pricey
But wait, cuz talk is cheap.... well then again, so is ya wifey
No.


Damn this was close, kind of weak really. both only had 2 bars that were
alright. and nothing was dope. I have seen alot better from each of you.
Alpha you were a bit more consistent, JTR kind of opened really strong..
and then the last 6 were just wack ass fuck. Alpha you had alot of attempts
but like i said only 2 hit from both of you, and as far as the total harshness
i just thinked JTR hit a bit more. His opener was the only bar i really liked in
the whole battle..so yeah, sorry alpha v/j
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Old 02-27-09, 06:54 PM   #8
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Alpha:
The sites kind of inactive, so consider me a new host
Cuz I'll leave JTR so dead..
.. even the forum will seem flooded with posts
5/10 - decent opener.
You don't know me? I'm Kryptic dude, so drop ya pen
Cuz i'll leave ya with notions.. and you'll NEVER walk again
3/10 - nah.
Civil fucked up on matchups, i'm stuck slappin a con
Cuz when I optical you everyone will -c- where you belong
4.5/10 - iight.
You want my shit, but ya can't have it bitch respect my phonics
Because my dictions JTR..
... and any other fag who tries hoppin on it
4/10 - iight.
RV's ya life, shit's gonna get fucked up when ya lose..
I hope ya survive the jump...
... but thats a big fall from ya roof
4.5/10 - ok closer.
21/50

JTR:
Bitch why start shit? Call me a faggot but you're gettin ripped regardless
Cuz the only time Alphabet gave anyone trouble was in Kindergarden
5/10 - decent opener.
I spit good rap, your wordplay is shit and you should be shook man
With Pun's that are so fucking wack they make Terror Squad look bad
4/10 - lol, played but w/e... decent.
My wordplay's ill; I connect with homophones when I say phat rhymes
You only connect with homophones when you call gay chat lines
4/10 - decent.
Alpha aint iller he a groupie, and his skills aren't with the cuties
I know what you did last summer
...chased screaming girls but never got em like the killer from the movie
3.5/10 - nah.
Only girl you've ever gotten is a WHORE, and that hoe isn't pricey
But wait, cuz talk is cheap.... well then again, so is ya wifey
5/10 - decent closer.
21.5/50


very closer battle here guys, looks like JTR took this battle by .5 ... wasnt nothin' hott as i expected though ...


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Old 03-01-09, 10:48 AM   #9
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You don't know me? I'm Kryptic dude, so drop ya pen
Cuz i'll leave ya with notions.. and you'll NEVER walk again
Civil fucked up on matchups, i'm stuck slappin a con
Cuz when I optical you everyone will -c- where you belong

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Bitch why start shit? Call me a faggot but you're gettin ripped regardless
Cuz the only time Alphabet gave anyone trouble was in Kindergarden
I spit good rap, your wordplay is shit and you should be shook man
With Pun's that are so fucking wack they make Terror Squad look bad

both came below average to me. i think jtr had the better wording and threw in a funny nameplay. alpha was setting up more clever punches though and his punches had more directness to them. both had two punches that connected to me.

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Old 03-01-09, 08:06 PM   #10
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Alpha


The sites kind of inactive, so consider me a new host
Cuz I'll leave JTR so dead..
.. even the forum will seem flooded with posts
wasnt feelin this.
You don't know me? I'm Kryptic dude, so drop ya pen
Cuz i'll leave ya with notions.. and you'll NEVER walk again
I liked this one, good wordplay
Civil fucked up on matchups, i'm stuck slappin a con
Cuz when I optical you everyone will -c- where you belong
decent
You want my shit, but ya can't have it bitch respect my phonics
Because my dictions JTR..
... and any other fag who tries hoppin on it
wordplay was okay, but not really too fond of the gay jokes...
RV's ya life, shit's gonna get fucked up when ya lose..
I hope ya survive the jump...
... but thats a big fall from ya roof
um, na.


JTR


Bitch why start shit? Call me a faggot but you're gettin ripped regardless
Cuz the only time Alphabet gave anyone trouble was in Kindergarden
Good bar, i liked this one, good set up nice execution.
I spit good rap, your wordplay is shit and you should be shook man
With Pun's that are so fucking wack they make Terror Squad look bad
na aint feeling it. terror squad actually makes money... ya'll dont..
My wordplay's ill; I connect with homophones when I say phat rhymes
You only connect with homophones when you call gay chat lines
No, gay jokes are wack and played
Alpha aint iller he a groupie, and his skills aren't with the cuties
I know what you did last summer
...chased screaming girls but never got em like the killer from the movie
wasnt feeling it... left more to be desired.
Only girl you've ever gotten is a WHORE, and that hoe isn't pricey
But wait, cuz talk is cheap.... well then again, so is ya wifey
no, not good at all... do you even know if he has a girl? and even if he does have a girl. this doesn't hit hard.


eh, decent battle i guess... I thought a lot of the concepts were pretty much played, i think JTR had the best punchline but overall Alpha came with the better verse and more interesting lyrics. Seemed like JTR had lots of fillers and was pretty much all over the place. JTR went from alpha chasing screaming girls and not getting them too... alpha having a wifey and shes worth nothing... i guess work on consistency JTR and you'd have this.

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Old 03-02-09, 01:30 AM   #11
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3-2... i'm guessing voting is closed?
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Old 03-02-09, 05:51 PM   #12
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damn alpha came back lol good battle guys..


jtr goes to the jump
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