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05-09-04, 10:42 PM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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vango vs. illtalic(forced word match)
IP: 275E DC37
deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse forced words must be bolded or something so people can see them bar limits: 16 bar min. 32 bar max. forced words you must use these in your battle verse or be d'q: nature, intersection, ability, process
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05-10-04, 04:14 AM | #2 | |||
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IP: B89A 3C2B
Lol.
Czech.
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05-10-04, 03:18 PM | #3 | ||||
RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: AA51 3382
checkin in
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05-13-04, 12:11 PM | #4 | ||||
RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
illtalic where are you come and out play. lol
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05-13-04, 08:53 PM | #5 | ||||
RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: 80EF 45DD
Alright bitch, this is how its done
First of all am I battlin Illtalic or Casual, cuz aint nobody heard of ya, How bout I call you John Doe Rapper, straight up after I murder ya How you expect to beat me if you cant even choose a name? How you expect to be a player when you dont understand the game? See you lack the "ability" to test my mental agility, your a janitor in this rap game WHILE I OWN THE FACILITY IF this rap game was a race I'd leave you spinnin wheels at the "intersection" How come you the only cat on RB with a bodyguard for PROTECTION!! Cuz Illtalic your like cement, all mixed up and takes forever to come hard I asked this cat for some weed, and HE STARTED WORKING IN THE YARD! Illtalic Its not in my "nature" to hate ya, but I gotta tell ya I think your styles played Not to mention I burnt your school down, just so you could get out of the third grade Thru this "process" of elimination Im seperating the strong from the weak, Your like Memphis from the Roc, cuz your futures looking BLEEK See im bringin more HEAT, than Dewayne Wade against the Pacers, after seeing Illtalic spit, I wish Rap battles had more erasers But it could never be that easy to simply eliminate your verse You could prewrite your shit for days, and ill still kill you unrehearsed Your like the definition of PAUSE, simply put Vango defines REWIND Nobody would even FEEL Ya, even if you were lost in the school for THE BLIND And I dont usually do gay jokes, but Ill call a fag a fag I heard you offered Shadows Edge a blowjob if he put your name up in the MAG I was reading your AVatar the other day and it said BANG BANG YOUR DEAD But before you start to bustin, you better make sure your full of lead Cuz Illtalic's just a butter knife, while Im steady choppin heads, you got as much chance of beating me as TONY SOPRANO JOINING THE FEDS
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05-14-04, 06:40 AM | #6 | |||
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IP: B89A 3C2B
Vango`s gotta go.. the kid doesn`t have a chance in hell
Cos this fag`s quickly disposed.. like antique`s in garage sales You put ya neck on the line with those stretched lines Killed ya own rep.. an let me outshine ya verse with mine I`m walkin` ability.. you can`t touch it.. or me for that fact Ya wack.. i`ll applaud you out.. nice try but ya gettin` clapped An we aint talkin` ovation.. Van`s confused.. so i pass him by Have him cut down before he starts.. inter sections.. like bye-bye Oh my.. looks like you was dealt a bad hand.. so i ace this An throw fists.. while you throw in more towels than room service I`m strippin` any credibility.. have ya wackness laid bare an taught That this pussy`s exposed.. like a Female Only Nature Resort The League`s mine.. you`re a steppin` stone in the right direction Van`s goin` an gone.. i`m winnin`.. by a process of elimination.
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05-14-04, 08:13 AM | #7 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
breakdown for vango:
flow:it worked better in some spots then others but overall good job 7/10 volcab:not that good pretty basic things here not what i expect from you 5/10 punches:some alright punches good use of the words in them too best line,"See you lack the "ability" to test my mental agility, your a janitor in this rap game WHILE I OWN THE FACILITY" if you could of done your whole verse like that you could of gotten better score in my eyes 7/10 overall:19/30 breakdown for illtalic: flowretty straight forward no complexity to your structure but it worked i cause 6/10 volcab:i'm giving you more then vango cause you atleast weren't rhyming lines with the same words but still could be better 6/10 punches:not much here you lacked alot of lines some alright ones though like,"Cos this fag`s quickly disposed.. like antique`s in garage sales" 6/10 overall:18/30 vote--vango gets my vote
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-15-04, 12:56 PM | #8 | ||||
RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: AA51 3382
Yo this cat didnt even spit on time.
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05-16-04, 04:51 AM | #9 | ||||||
Street Royal-T
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IP: 08FE 4ABA
See you lack the "ability" to test my mental agility, your a janitor in this rap game
WHILE I OWN THE FACILITY See im bringin more HEAT, than Dewayne Wade against the Pacers, after seeing Illtalic spit, I wish Rap battles had more erasers some nice solid punches and personals from vango 71/10 I`m strippin` any credibility.. have ya wackness laid bare an taught That this pussy`s exposed.. like a Female Only Nature Resort The League`s mine.. you`re a steppin` stone in the right direction Van`s goin` an gone.. i`m winnin`.. by a process of elimination. some hot shit there son, awsome flow but didnt contain as many personals as vango hot shit tho 69/100 v/vango
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05-16-04, 08:35 PM | #10 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
2-0 vango wins
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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