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Old 05-23-04, 09:46 PM   #1
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king solo vs. L.X.

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deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.
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Old 05-24-04, 08:10 AM   #2
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Old 05-24-04, 09:39 PM   #3
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checkin n
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Old 05-24-04, 09:51 PM   #4
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aight check it.....
This my first battle with the king but if Ya have some competition though...
LOL...You finally Noticed Nigga ya so wack the King Done went Solo....
No beef but the only beef we have is you suckin my slim Jim....
Its like the Nba Playoffs becuz Im about the take the Crown Away from him..
If I gave ya wack ass an Easy opponent It probably would be black thief...
Becuz you cant handle me..Im like a mad cow disease you dont want my beef....
Ya boyz Done went up say ass and you only said I want more....
But The last time I checked ya avatar..When was you the last king in 1754...
The king is reborn..He spit Croocket his verses is bent...
Since he was the king in 1754 accordin to tha avatar..Ya verses is anctient..
I know ya anctient But ya probably atleast have one bone....
Becuz hes being more fruity in the booty then Fred Flintstone.....
I didnt really want to battle Ya..next time Ill leave ya alone.....
I dont mess wit gay people that lost the virginity on the damn phone...
Fat as santa clause more like his elf.......(Ya helper)
But if you think your the king...you better rethink ya self....
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Old 05-24-04, 09:53 PM   #5
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This is like one of my best spits...Good luck
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Old 05-24-04, 09:58 PM   #6
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first off i already beat black thief
and another thing learn how to spell man...lmao...NO HATE!!!

Aight
Check it.............................................
I’m the KiNg u better honour me cuz a skilled MC u ain’t gonna be
This battle is KiNg SoLo……vs. a fuckin bitch ass L.I. wannabe
Not only ure name, but ure signature is rippin off Deadly Visionz
The rules say no feedin but I still eat up every line that ure spittin
Ure a no talent bitch who can’t spit I bet sumone else made-ure-lines
Change ure name from L.X. to E.P. cuz Everything’s Plagiarized
Look L.X. has been offering help for 8 days and still no replies
Cuz really he’s a newbie bitch dressed up in a veteran disguise
I hope u enjoyed beating newbs cuz now ure winning streak is through
I’ll strap some crayons to my knuckles so I can beat u black and blue
Get all ure battles compiled and in total they still equal no style
I see ure name in the AI roster but look, ure the only one on trial
Ure unknown with no profile after ure trial u’ll get put on the used pile
Save ureself the pressure and leave now cuz u gonna get denial!!
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Old 05-25-04, 09:07 AM   #7
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breakdown for l.x.:

flow:you had some internal rhyming but but bars were so off balance that it didn't really help not the best part of your vese here 4/10

volcabretty basic stuff no effort seems to be put forward 5/10

punches:i don't se too much really hurting here mainly played topic even the best line was a played idea,"Becuz you cant handle me..Im like a mad cow disease you dont want my beef...." try to come up with some more orginal stuff 5/10

overall:14/30 better then alot of the league in their first week but don't good enough this week

breakdown for king solo:

flow:tight internal rhyming was working threw the parts that had it good job here 7/10

volcab:a whole level above l.x good job 7/10

puncheS:some great lines here you got pretty personal and stayed on him through the whole vese my fav line,"Change ure name from L.X. to E.P. cuz Everything’s Plagiarized"
good job 7/10

overall:21/30

vote--king solo
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Old 05-25-04, 09:43 AM   #8
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King Solo 1-0 L.X.
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Old 05-25-04, 01:52 PM   #9
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can't vote cos im in king's crew but he absolutely merked this kid, very nice drop i thought.....pz

like the crayon line...lol
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Old 05-25-04, 04:15 PM   #10
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L.X...good spit,but basic vocab
structure an flow were ok...bit choppy at times though.
u had multies but they were fairly simple...up ya complexity
some good metas..again need more creativity
punches were ok but come a lot harder
overall-good spit but not gud enough 2 beat king solo

kingsolo
u had bets structure/flow woz quick n easy to follow
basically u had beta wordplay/creativity
ur punches came harder n u hit him wit sum solid personals
overall king u ripped this cat

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Old 05-25-04, 05:20 PM   #11
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Nope dis a d/r vote...LOL he mad becuz I voted against him in flows intelligent..He mad becuz he keep askin me to vote and I didnt vote and stuff And I voted for the winner..D/r Vote...
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Old 05-25-04, 05:31 PM   #12
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No its not King did come better then u he had some funny as lines and way better punches and Personals.I thought ti wasnt gonna be close but wasnt really that close..

Punches-KS
Personals-KS
Flow-Tie
Strucuture-Tie
Overall-KS

King=7.656/10
.Flows./L.X./X who ever lol=6.324/10
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Old 05-25-04, 07:38 PM   #13
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that is
KiNg SoLo 3 - 0 L.X.

and t-storm aint a d/r
yo check that same battle u voted against him in
t-storm vs. flow intelligent

cuz i voted in that battle to
and i voted against t-storm as well
so stop bitchin cuz u losin
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Old 05-28-04, 01:19 AM   #14
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This wasn't very close at all, King was more clever and witty, his punches just hit harder, and he flowed a lot better, pretty one-sided battle

vote = king
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Old 05-30-04, 08:36 PM   #15
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4-0 king solo wins
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