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Old 07-11-08, 12:41 AM   #16
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The fuck..you musta felt cool as shit thinkin you'd champ by no show..

Thats a long ass verse dude, I'm ashamed jus after readin a couple too.
But its a sure thing after posting that shitty of a verse,..not even 2 v's could end up a W.
Your in trouble dude, I'm a bounty hunter so how you n ya girl get mixed up.
Cuz she's got a price on her head - that I'd never pay JUST to get my dick sucked.
Get ripped up, cuz when it comes to text I'm only known as vicious.
But if someone calls me two faced..I assure u its not cuz I'm twice as ugly as that bitch is.
I know this is an OMB memorial, I was hopin' it'd be you,
But after readin through your fuckin verse, you're gonna have to name one after me too,
Smashin ya dude,..I'm the sickest an we know you aint' doper shit.
Cuz if you do have an ocean of talent..then the rest of us will just be sailin all over it.
You gotta be kiddin' me. You wish you could get rid of me,
Cuase when I retaliate and drop too..then my fuckin verse will do it literally.
This faggot sucks dick, an when I point it out he'll truely be pissed.
An his style doesn't Overllapse - thats just where his fuckin head usually is.
Confused that he's bitch..I'm not much of a drinker but this didnt' seem to haze me.
Cuz as for all your Fourty concepts..I could guzzle em all an them not even phase me.
Try an play me..your verse is shit, mine wil hurt so quit an you'll clearly see.
That the jokes only on me...cuz NOONE in these forums would take that verse seriously.
Gassed up..your usually ass up so this stallion will be handled smoothely.
And if your ever hung like a horse..thats just because Im a supporter of animal cruelty.
Bitch ask for repentance..just with one smack I could end this.
As for your fourty bars..they will ALL just be closed for fuckin lack of attendance.
Get wrecked quick, this so called vets a bitch always tryin to avoid us.
Bitch we all nuisance you fuckin posted that all your verse would do is annoy us.
Your an asshole..but harsh comments got ya shook so why mention it bitch.
Quit actin like a pussy,..always got a dickhead in ya..when your really sensitive as shit.
Bitch your mehh at best, you overrate yourself whenever there's a belt in the air.
EVEN if we show a Prime example of you..it doesn't compare to everyone elses in theres.
You ain't never gotten better..you suck, think ya verse is complex? where?
Ya headed to the top for a reason..what u think the rest of us are gonna climb on to get there.
- *I suck vote against me*
- *Removed similiar concept punch from here btw*
RB is known..but last season Jr's roster had its up's an down n you can't handle me.
How you gonna claim your better when you got kicked out of the season that i champed with ease?


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shit he should drop like 8 sick ass bars lol


I smash herbs, leave ya ass hurt. I'll leave ya deceased kid.
You did go 40 bars..but even he knows less than a fuckin quarter of ya verse was actually decent.
Were those punches you were sending me?..they all missed so you'll envy me.
There's no way your verse could backfire though..seein as you have NEVER dropped any heat.
Maybe you don't like the Scottish instrument,..but that shit you posted must beckon it.
Cuz you would never play a bagpipe - but you are usually on the prowl tryin to get some dick.
Halfway through..but more than you got, still this dikes done.
Dude when eyelash your fuckin verse,..I'll keep whippin it until your punches fall off like one.
I'm the champ son..I'm amped up an for you there ain't no next round.
If its true what they say about 'firefly's...then I'm positive ur fuckin verse has never left the ground.
You got a big ass head, postin 80 lines for nothin, I'm suprised if it even got a laugh.
We ALL know 2v's forehead - you know..he's always gung ho about suckin somebody's shaft.
Actin like your verse was actually good..it ain't gonna receive any record.
An with all those whack concepts..I'm sure you could even impress a hooker without any effort.
You aint' shit, go head an complain, its true that ya flare is dust.
He is feelin froggy though - slimey..covered with warts an fuckin small when he's compared to us.
You must play sports or something? But ya haven been clever as of recent.
2v's actually a goalkeeper..... he would never put em out there with hopes to ever achieve em.
Go back to the basics...maybe that'd help, either way I'm beatin the shit out of ya dude.
EVEN if you go back to your roots..you'd jus be whacker than the shitty plant ya sprouted into.
This virgin uses tricks to spice up his fake sex life..so now his cover's hurtin.
Bitch only your handmade' ya OWN dick feel like it was bein held by another person.
My concepts are sexy as shit,..yours are worthless, dont' get confused so trust me.
An when I handsome to you..you'd even word em bad enough to be viewed as ugly.
Your girl may seem to be faithful, no thanks to me..but your in luck sir.
Your girl would only be a horrify wasn't scared off by all the times she begged me to fuck her.
Yeah after that I guess you can relax, but just be reminded.
Go ahead an kickback faggot..it wont' come even half as fuckin close to matchin what mine did.
You must be an actor for sure..I'm smackin ya first. This bitch is just handled.
Cuz this is ONE bitchmove in your Lifetime , that'd actually land you a movie fit for the channel.
Yeah we know you write a bit,..so go ahead n send us some pieces.
He's only actually had to masterpiece,..cuz he aint' fit to fuel a war with with anyone decent.
That verse isn't worthy of bein admired..I had some hunches that is was vile.
The only thing your newsreels in is just a bunch of clips of fuckin whack punches you compiled.
Actin like your makin money?..Well I'm here to wreck em quick.
2' does have a good payroll goin though.. that he won't ever be able to catch up with.
Your airlines suck..an your lack of talent really has no relovance.
Alot of concepts compose your fly style, so if you pilot up..it'd still only resemble shit.
Circumstances required it, act like your admired bitch..it ain't fair to be wrong.
I recycled once for a reason..while you just throw your entire verse in the garbage where it belongs.



pz..



I posted 70 some...I didn't think it mattered if I didn't match a punch or two..like 70 some lines in a few hours..hope its up to par. Sorry for not havin it up on time.
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Old 07-11-08, 01:00 AM   #17
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Nothing but respect for the both of you!!! Sick final in memory of omb!!!

Im looking at a entire site for votes on this!!!
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Old 07-11-08, 08:51 AM   #18
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Listen Lay.. I respect your verse, and that you wrote many bars, but when I said
"& I suppose if your verse isn't put to good use HERE then it's eligible for Your recycle."

And you said
"Girls hate this fag..so we need to deal some luck in for him.
love IS blind..an it explains why he's seen clear as shit since we was fuckin born."

Here,

When you said
"bitch's ain't about the old type..must be jokin if u think u'll hold hype
now if love is blind...it explains why B's had perfect vision his whole life!"
There:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...813&postcount=5

I get pretty pissed off.

Lol @ your last line defending recycling.

Aight though man, I read your verse. Good luck in the battling. Best of wishes to you.

I'm really, REALLY happy that we could do this for Jo-Jo.

peace

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'cuz he's dead... and that's the only reason i read it. R.I.P.
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Old 07-11-08, 12:00 PM   #19
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Its a concept I've used before I didnt' recycle the same bar, its 80 lines..you tried an pull a bitch move to win in the finals?..Go ahead n sway some more dude, grats. Don't act like your tryin to make this good or soemthign cuz u went 80. You went 80 on the night it was due without tellin me..you almost fuckin ruined the finals, your lucky I even cared enough to come up with 80 lines so there would be a match. Out of all the concepts your gonna complain like a lil bitch cuz I used a similar concept?..you know how hard it is to come up with 80 some lines in a 3 hours. You don't cuz u took all week on your verse. Stop complainin you just make yourself look gay.
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Old 07-11-08, 12:05 PM   #20
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I'll edit that punch out an let you have like 4 or 5 more punches than me. Should be fair.
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Old 07-11-08, 12:19 PM   #21
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Fuck you bitch. Don't call it sway.. That's what you're doing. You don't even know me, or how I live my life, you wouldn't have known I was going to give you a full extra day to write your petty verse, did you? But here you are sitting here on your ass, on the middle of Friday, acting like the entire thing was a bitch move.

Suck the dicks that you love making so many disses about.

I'm out.. Now shut your fucking ass up.
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Old 07-11-08, 12:23 PM   #22
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Swwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy likeeee a treee son. pz
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Old 07-11-08, 06:55 PM   #23
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Lay won.

2v's verus was fucking lame in comparsion. Wheres the fucking good punches??

Lay's were creative and dope
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Old 07-12-08, 05:24 PM   #24
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rofl

a day later...not one fucking post
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Old 07-12-08, 09:17 PM   #25
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K fuck you guys im going to vote on this.
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Old 07-12-08, 10:58 PM   #26
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K so fucking hell to fuck you kids
I wrote out a whole vote.

heres the break down.

Punches went to lay
personals went to lay

those are integral to the battle

2v, you needed more personals / harder punches.. I wasnt feeling a lot of your stuff...

Step it up guys I expected a shit load more from a finals battle..

If this is no good fuck you im pissed to shit I lost my whole vote I had done.. assholes

cunts.

Vote Lay.
Fuck you im not reading any more so long. cunts
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Old 07-13-08, 12:37 PM   #27
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I challenge the winner of this to a 60 line battle to really pay homage to one of the greats.
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Old 07-16-08, 06:08 PM   #28
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Lay Fear wins. Congratulations
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Old 07-16-08, 06:31 PM   #29
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With two votes. Congrats man!!
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