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Old 08-16-03, 08:05 PM   #1
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guff to read!!

IP: 34BF DD77

More guff to read!

my name is Steph, a noose around my neck,
i dont want sucess, i just need respect,
walk around with my pants down for no reason at all
take a look at the writing, its on the wall;
gonna change the way that you look at me,
comin here to adress you all personally,
in the midnight hours, ill delete your pulse
fall over the couch and say its not my fault,
born blind in one eye, not a tragedy though,
cause what i lack in vision i make up for in soul,
and when i set a goal, ill stop at nothin to reach it,
even if it means devoting my life, ill make no secret
take whatever you can throw and throw it back,
heart attacks, orthopeadic backs, bursting cd racks,
its a circle of blame, but i cant complain
cause i started it im gonna see it through to the end.
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Old 08-16-03, 09:09 PM   #2
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wow..this was pretty weak..

Things you did not do:

1. Rap with a purpose
2. Flow
3. Make it interesting
4. Use GOOD multis (there were some but not good ones)
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