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04-25-03, 11:23 AM | #1 | ||||||
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::::*~Brainz Blown~*::::
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~~ ~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~~ :::Ears ringing, rumors lingering, saying BaKCardii's a bastard, born to faces switched with satan, seeing things cause I'm plastered~~~ mixed with-in, the blood with-sin, adrenaline seepin through skin, my brains blown to the fact that the devils me friend~~~ catastrophies on my thoughts when they rain in my head, and you think you see tears?, nah that's the rage that I shed~~~ I cant absorb to the fact I'm chewed and swallowed by fright, my visions blurred to the signs voices louder at night~~~ :::An Elm street inside my mind but no freddy's not here, a temporary storage organ for my feelings an fears~~~ things propelled from my lips would leave you silent like lambs giving me another reason to get a mental exam~~~ dont get it wrong I'm not crazy i just look at shyt different fuck the world and what it's worth cause mine is torn and demented~~~ seen stampeding in the darkness, trying to get out quick before my mind freezes time and invites me on trips~~~ but no one can hear me scream not even the 13th ghost saying I'm a lost cause and uh, welcome to the colt~~~ :::But see my souls gone and my brain is distorted must have been that shot of guilt and that anger I snorted~~~ cant understand that when i think my thoughts is nearly contagious and when I speak many people cackle Jesus just save her~~~ used to wish of slit-wrists and mis-fits in dark spaces, now I wish of pure's kiss in dim lights with mime faces~~~ but like it says it's just a wish and me, I'm gutter grown, but when I wake up from the daze, dont matter my brainz blown~~~ ....... |
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04-25-03, 11:24 AM | #2 | ||||||
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^^^^
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04-28-03, 09:38 AM | #3 | ||||||
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sleep huh?......^^^^^^
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05-01-03, 02:38 AM | #4 | |||||||
..terror walks again..
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deffintly feelin this. ya flow was well writ neva lettin up either. ya horror movie metaphors put in sum great imagery. i liked how this peice just grew deeper like it was evolvin. sucks foe the sleepin, but i think ya scared them away with the lenght, but a dope peice no doubt.
stAy up
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05-01-03, 11:06 AM | #5 | ||||||
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thnx..upppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!
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05-01-03, 12:05 PM | #6 | ||||||
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excellent flow and wordplay
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