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Old 05-14-05, 01:48 PM   #40
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Marvs Verse:

lol u back again?,i could c our battle aint leave dis kid shook.
but da day u 'Da-FEET' me ppl a start 2 believe in "big-FOOT".
Self Glorification..No Real Diss...4/10
prick look!...u been here for a while now still aint got hot quote.
invek's a "clumbsy drug dealer" datz only way he'll "drop-dope".
Wow..How Played Man..3/10
ya moms is whut u call a junkie,fam stop u get more wack & borin monthly.
i cant lose so if they say "your-up" they talkin bout da "foreign country".
Hm...Wow Weak..3/10
IN-vektive ya punches r IN-effective u IN-active..whuts goten IN-to you?
ur IN-sane u neva been IN- da booth fukk rap look 4 a job IN-terview.
WTF? Is This How Much You Can Repeat The Same Word Tourney? 2/10
ya parents shouldn't of had IN-tercourse,as a noob u was spittin recless.
till U GOT KOED By ME,and did like a "shy dj" and "hide ya record".
Hmm..Nice Meta and Punch..6/10
started doin audio's now u focus rite?,nope asshole u aint close 2 nice.
invektive ya 'LP wont work'..n why? u name dat shit a "a BROKEN MiC".*
Haha..Nice..8/10
invektive a thug? nah he's pussy rv u'll find dis head shook in da house.
i dont mean "the ENERGy DRiNK" but u stay with "RED BULL in ya mouth".
LoL..God Damn Consistent Three Bars All Hard Hitting 9/10

Overall: 35/70

Invektives Verse:

it may be coincidence...but i think your sig holds a true meaning
Nas holds that number up 4 a reason...its the round your leaving
Played...Not A Nice Bar In My Eyes...4/10
he's been texting for years...Marvin's cartoon seems fact now
he never spits over a beat...the martians mouth is blacked out
Ugh...Weak 4/10
Marv's verses put me to sleep..his text is my therapy meditator
in rap...your going nowhere...like putting Slinky's on Escalators
Decent Metaphor..6/10
son, your not on my level...your garbage; clearly seein defeat
and you couldnt get caught up, even if u put Usher's CD on repeat
Nice Metaphor Again..7/10
Marv left TE in search to command..but he was put to silence
how can you be the general of a crew...when u have no privates?
Blah..False Fact but Nice Metaphor 6/10
your ranked higher...but we all know Goliath has just got to fall
cause
your chances are like "9's blastin Shaq"..u dont have a "shot a tall"
Um..No. 3/10

Overall: 30/60

MarvJay1009 Wins This Battle 3-2

~R~

Last edited by Lay-Text : 05-15-05 at 01:53 AM.
 
 


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