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Old 04-28-06, 06:54 PM   #1
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!!~~im Ready For War Niggas~~!! Peep Hot New Track

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3859417

hellz yea, this shit fa all tha niggas that got shyt 2 say 2 me online and off, plus i heard this beat and had 2 write a song to it

links comin....

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2730891
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...900#post2730900

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Old 04-28-06, 07:05 PM   #2
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bump bump bump............................................
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Old 04-28-06, 09:33 PM   #3
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Listening...

Like the voice... the hook's mad catchy... the beat's pretty tough... I fucks with it... flow's pretty even... got a few multies in there... dind't say anything really stand out as far as lyrics go though... the beat and the hook really made the track...

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Old 04-28-06, 09:56 PM   #4
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to commercial for me...the bat sits the track though...the voice is gully though...the flow is sounding cool...maybe a little tweaking but for the most part it's cool..lyrics are sub par nothing lyrical...this is a good commerical track.bless.
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Old 04-29-06, 12:45 AM   #5
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thx fa the feed, i feel good cuz i was goin for comercial, i try 2 make my shit like shyt that would get played on the radio, but thatnx fa tha feed, ima keep that in mind, bumpin......
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Old 04-29-06, 12:51 AM   #6
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btw did anyone peep that shyt

"so i suggest that you stop clown, before i rearrange ya face MAKE UP YA LIP WHEN I CUM DOWN!"

jus curious
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Old 04-29-06, 01:09 AM   #7
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bibaty bump .
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Old 04-29-06, 11:14 AM   #8
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btw did anyone peep that shyt

"so i suggest that you stop clown, before i rearrange ya face MAKE UP YA LIP WHEN I CUM DOWN!"

jus curious


yeah I heard it... but one witty line amongst many... doesn't make the whole track witty, and or really stand alone material lyrically... feel me?
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Old 04-29-06, 11:44 AM   #9
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beat is cool
first thing that stands out is bad mixing it doesnt sound right
the clown line was good
but your overdubs were bad on it you made the best line stand out like whoa lol
hook is cool
overall this song would have been pretty cool if it wasnt for the effects or whatever your using makes you sound fake and wack in my opinion and it also sounds liek youre screaming in some parts
this track had potential def not my favorite from you
hit me up for a collab sometime
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Old 04-29-06, 11:52 AM   #10
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aight thx, uppin for feed,

yea lol i admit im not to good at mixing, i had to use a tutorial, and im guessing it wasnt to good lol, but word H.D. i feel u, ill remember that in my next song
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Old 05-01-06, 04:12 PM   #11
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lol throwback .
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