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06-16-08, 02:26 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Yung MEDIkated vs Kirk
IP: 46DC DA3A
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UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-19-08 at 02:26 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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06-18-08, 11:32 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 46DC DA3A
Yung MEDIkated has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-08 11:32 AM.
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06-18-08, 02:28 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 9244 687A
Kirk has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-18-08 02:28 PM.
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06-19-08, 04:49 AM | #4 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 20CD 5579
Bitch I'm an animal/
Like hannibal...I'm a cannible/ Your cotton candy from a carnival Because your so sweet, so sweet/ I'm so strong....your so weak/ I'm so mighty...your so meek/ Your so beach...I'm so street/ Yet you play in the sand...because I'm so deep/ You'll get jawed like shark meat/ This battles a race... I pace like a heart beat/ Who's better than i ...who's better than me...I am three...so who's better than we...not he,not she...but if you is... then us aint we... And if kirks the greatest...where would that leave me Because I'm greater than the greatest/ And better than the best/ Kirks good like "A's"...I'm good like like sex/ I'm the produce section...I remain so fresh/ So I remain the best... I'm so savage....your tamed like pets.... Your tom... I'm jerry....I over power the cat/ You almost declined the battle but soul through you a snack/ Like racket ball your "Wack"/
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06-19-08, 11:40 AM | #5 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: 9244 687A
I'm not gonna try very hard, so you don't have to tell me how crappy my verse is.
Tired jerk try and work me but I got the win in my pocket, Cause you ignite a verse and hope your fire works but you don't rocket, Your writtens are fucked. Poor bitch, you ain't shit but a butt, And I'd love to drop sense, but you'd prolly start pickin' it up, Your shits bland. You ain't shit, you're just a bitch, man, You build yourself up so much, if you win, your fatass could wear the belt as a wristband, I don't feel like typing more, cause this battle is stupid, Cause I'd slash/ your verse to fuckin' pieces, but you prolly beat me to it. 5 minutes. |
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06-20-08, 12:39 PM | #6 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: 9244 687A
Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppin.
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06-20-08, 12:53 PM | #7 | |||||
don't try.
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IP: EBB4 6039
Voted For: Kirk
Your writtens are fucked. Poor bitch, you ain't shit but a butt, And I'd love to drop sense, but you'd prolly start pickin' it up, vs. nothing v/kirk for better verse.
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06-20-08, 03:59 PM | #8 | |||||
~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: 611A A12A
Voted For: Kirk
v/kirk k... well, you were right kirk, your verse was pretty crappy playboy...but it was more than enough to overwhelm little homie. at least you attempted to throw in some punches and shit. you should easily catch the win in this bout...but as far as the way votes have been dropped recently, who knows. yung... man. i admire your drive and all...but you really need to fine tune your work. there are a lot of things that you really, really, really need to work on...which would be: punches, personals, meta's, structure, multies (if possible), vocab etc. im going to end this on a quick note: when you are text battling, never self glorify and never diss yourself. it seems like you tend to do either waaaay too much in your battles that i have peeped. it's a great way to lose. save all that shit for your cyphers or open mic sessions. word. good luck gentlemen, keep it pushin' battlecats. one love. s.v.
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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06-20-08, 04:05 PM | #9 | |||||
~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: 611A A12A
if you gentlemen haven't already done so, please drop your thoughts on my latest topical battle:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=246558 ^^^supervillain vs. deadlyv kirk, i just realized that you did a 5 minute key. that explains why you took it easy on dude. lol. i was wondering what was up with all that. the supe, c.s.
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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06-20-08, 04:46 PM | #10 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: 9244 687A
Thanks for the votes.
And yeah, SV. I never come that shitty unless its intentional. Haha. |
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06-20-08, 06:14 PM | #11 | ||||||||
Pushin it....
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IP: F3E4 5E69
Voted For: Kirk
i wasnt' goin to vote on this shit, cuz youngs a blood and all...and in fear of my family and life..i dont wanna piss him off but...i just had to....i just...had to Young fucking sucks
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06-20-08, 06:29 PM | #12 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 934F A17A
Voted For: Kirk
you win, its that easy you know it everyone knows it..your "half ass" verse was funny to read and just punched your opponent out of the ring. young med. your verse was structured bad had bad flow no real apparent punches...just shit. elevate man. v/kirk
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06-20-08, 08:39 PM | #13 | |||||||
New Jack
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IP: BA4E D525
Voted For: Kirk
acually your verse wasnt bad at all you ate him...but first you need to stop putting words saying that you didnt try because every verse you should put your all into it for real no matter who you are battling but i think you should battle me, it will be a challenge but u won hands down.....it wouldnt be easy battling me......seriously!!!
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