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No Crew, hate, or d/r Votes
No Recycling or biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-23-04 at 12:03 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 11:34 AM.

..kontroverzey.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 11:35 AM.

aiight heres my shit

www.soundclick.com/kontroverzy

ok i'm waitin for your verse here......................

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9th Degree vs. Kontroversy
Good luck bro...

first verse:
spare ya life? give me one good reason
This Dude runs from beef like fastin season
Yeah I Admit You was Good in the past
but these punches leave ya shakin like ali's ass
dawg u cant ra[, This Kid Is So wack
He walks around with Herb printed on his throwback
Have you tryin to breathe Like Fabolous
But You can’t cause these lines is so hazardous
Shove your tongue back to ya inside parts
Now tell the site you spit from the heart
you aint syck like bread your so plain B
only dope heads your near is cocaine fiends
I saw ya family filled with plenty dikes
My Rhymes are in the hood like mini bikes
Im So syck battling me u’ll catch west nile
My bars stick to ur ass Like Doggy Style


2nd verse:
Dude Comes at me like he tryna get cut
Burn you in ashes like cigarette butts
Batttlin Me? Dawg you playin with fire
U wanna clean my house? Dawg u hired
Dawg u wack u stay low on da board
He gets raped in the ass more den supa whores
Nigga say it with me, im the damn champ
This Kids The one that put herb on the map
Ur lines are played like rehearsed speeches
These lines stick to ya skin like them Leeches
Like the Sun Dawg I stay Hot
Like vanilla ice dawg u stay forgot
This Kid Purposly Commits Crimes
So he can have oral sex with Mystikal and shyne

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yo, 9th degree, you're link dont work, just lettin you know.......1, i'd like to drop a vote after i hear them both.....pc

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ok~thanks for the link,
kontro~good beat, was feelin your mic presence, nice flow and lyrics as well, you should try to be more clear with your words, you sound a little muffled,but not bad,nice strong voice as well..
9th~your lyrics were great,,lol,some good lines too, love the beat as well, i heard it before somewhere, your flow is good, still a little shaky, but you did well, the only thing i would say would be to try to unleash your emotion more, you sounded a little bit monotone here, but not bad, this is just constructive feedback for you both...because i'd want some honesty too, but you both did well, a few more,you guys will be dope....
this was tough to judge because you were both strong in areas and lacked in areas,but i'm going to go with kontroversey, due to strong mic presence and good delivery with his flow....great job both......1

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thanx for the honest vote ma...uppin.................

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Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

Imma give this to kontroverzey:

9th Degree: Good verse for a free. Ya had some decent punches. I just think that u lacking kinda in emotion. Also i think ya need to turn up ya lyrics. Nice verse though.

Kontroverzey: lol nice verse. Quality was good. I liked that beat. Scratches were coo. Nice Emotion Too. Punches were hard too.
Put herbs on the map...hahaha. That 1 was funny
That shit pretending to 9th was funny too. Nice verse man.

Ok i give this to Kontro coz he had betta emotion, quality and punches.

Vote:..Kontoverzey

Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

whoa,,whered my vote go? i already explained this shit....lol..well you guys know this so my vote went to kontroversey.....why did strobe erase my vote? i saw that thread, 9th degree,i thought he was gonna fix it,but he took my vote away........i thought it was close,like i said but i thought, that k rode the beat well and his flow was good, hmmm

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Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

I man, THis battle was off the hook and four feet to the left, dman im lame

ANyway, Kontro got this one, jsut, you both came nice, 9th, I'm likin your punches man, shit is dopeness, but you need to voice up a bit, get louder, other than that verse was fiyah, but i preffered the DeadlyVisions one, cos your last punch, about the feminine voice, dont really work here.

Sorry man.

Kontro, that verse made me Laugh, punches werent that great, but the middle bit, mimicking, shit was funny. You got a good voice, but punches werent that good, I gave it to you, cos that middle bit had me rollin, 9th, I think you got DV tho.

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Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

wow umm this battle goes to ..kontroverzey..
9th- had good personals flow..good beat..punches were okay some lines seemed like you stretched it cuz you lost breath...rhyme scheme was okay..vocab was basic from what i herd...and i think you shoulda spit a lil more than you did to put up more a fight....and beat was aight5/10

kon-okay nice punches herd a lot of them..flow was tight...herd some tight personals...likes the little interlude inbetween your verses..added to the flava...wordplay was good..vocab was nice...lines didnt seem stretched...rhyme scheme was nice..and you pretty much spit the limit which is good...cuz it adds more punches/personals..ect... overall nice drop you def came harder than 9th...8/10

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