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View Poll Results: judging by my rhyme what should i do next? | |||
jump off a bridge & stab myself on the way down | 0 | 0% | |
grab a chick lick her from the waste down | 0 | 0% | |
toss the pen and look for work downtown | 0 | 0% | |
start selling drugs | 0 | 0% | |
drop everything incuding a job if i had one to pursue a rap/writing career | 0 | 0% | |
keep smoking the herbs to help expand my rapping potential | 0 | 0% | |
get a job and rap on the side | 0 | 0% | |
go to school & abide by rules | 0 | 0% | |
date a cougar with a lot of money | 0 | 0% | |
sell my body to buy some studio time | 1 | 100.00% | |
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10-18-04, 06:47 AM | #2 | |
Whys That?
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IP:
yo this is dope.
copy and paste it into open mic if you wont more more people to see it and comment on it. my advice. cut down a few bar's a couple seemed a little stretched. Flow was nice. Structure's a bit off. It was hard to find the flow while spitting it.. but i actually liked this alot. take it to the open mic forum and you wil recieve feed on it as long as you give decent feed to other's ish. I also like the topic's thru out it. the line's. I concentrate to write this but I have an itchy nose this goes out to those I admire most heavens only daughter God only knows.. versatility like mine keeps tricks on their toes.. I'm in the zone but prone to low-blows.. From the streets to the bedsheets baby anything goes.. I can smell this jealous kat trying to stop my cyber flow.. when i spat this i stoped at spat these line's again because they appealed to me as some dope line's. take it to open mic... keep dropping ,stay active. pz |
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