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Old 02-23-09, 02:43 PM   #1
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one way -b- .vs Wordz Uh God -b-

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Old 02-23-09, 04:13 PM   #2
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Old 02-24-09, 08:27 PM   #3
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death is here........
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Old 02-27-09, 01:52 AM   #4
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8 - 10. .
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Old 02-27-09, 10:28 AM   #5
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no......14

You claim this a walk in the park, but here’s what the truth brings
You came on a menstrual cycle and spend most the time on a mood swing
I refuse to take you seriously, you really aint nothing but a wanna be
If you were the wordz ah god, The Passion would have been a comedy
But you’re the first one to call a religious punch used on you lame
You did it last week, But followed it with one glorifying your name
If we came face to face you know for sure I’ll be wasting you jerk
I’ll smash your head off your verse just to rub your face in the dirt
I wanted to throw a punch using name play, involving text and wits
But the only book at your level, was designed for crayons and kids
I don’t want drama son, so I wont tell you why I think you’re a joke
Cause if wordz were exchanged, I might face someone who’s dope
weak fuck, there is only one thing animal about your dorky rhymes
If I pointed out all your weak spots, you would resemble a porcupine


you really need to agree on this, before just doing it
Theres no forcing your opponent to drop more just because you did
He might not have that much time, or whatever. Just a reminder

Thanks.

K. stubbs


It says no where we have to agree on the lines, I didn't agre on 8-10 anyway
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Old 02-27-09, 10:10 PM   #6
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Old 02-27-09, 11:37 PM   #7
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Who the fuck r you??? Oh well, here we go again.

yooo
his verse=garbage n even the votes r sloppy
so after this beating
I'll battle ur Soul coz Im tired of stompin nobody.
Every post displays ur homosex
He stares @ the closet so hard
The monster in there knows his options r leave home or death.
my fist'll go completely through u
I dont acknowledge u at all
N' yeah there's only One Way.. too bad for u its through a fuckin wall.
U'll never be at my level
Its a peek as high as the gods
While Kris played u for Casino.. n just used ur name to fill a slot.
Fed u to the sharks
I can here ur heart crying out
N' if there's still only One Way.. the female sex'll start dying out.
U didn't wanna agree
But my Math is pleasin son
I'll be going from point b to a while u'll be goin from me.. to Jon
Wishin I'd no show
this kid should be ashaimed
coz Ive watched all ur moves.. After I kicked ur ribs in n u started rollin in pain.

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Old 02-28-09, 12:51 PM   #8
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I refuse to take you seriously, you really aint nothing but a wanna be
If you were the wordz ah god, The Passion would have been a comedy
But you’re the first one to call a religious punch used on you lame
You did it last week, But followed it with one glorifying your name


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but my Math is pleasin son
I'll be going from point b to a while u'll be goin from me.. to Jon


I am really surprised by this battle. one way you actually came really consistent
had alot of nice attempts....where as wordz had alot of simple and played concepts
you got to fix that structure back up man


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Old 02-28-09, 01:43 PM   #9
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You claim this a walk in the park, but here’s what the truth brings
You came on a menstrual cycle and spend most the time on a mood swing
5.5/10 - decent opener.
I refuse to take you seriously, you really aint nothing but a wanna be
If you were the wordz ah god, The Passion would have been a comedy
6.5/10 - decent personal.
But you’re the first one to call a religious punch used on you lame
You did it last week, But followed it with one glorifying your name
5.5/10 - good personal.
If we came face to face you know for sure I’ll be wasting you jerk
I’ll smash your head off your verse just to rub your face in the dirt
4.5/10 - meh.
I wanted to throw a punch using name play, involving text and wits
But the only book at your level, was designed for crayons and kids
5/10 - aahhh...
I don’t want drama son, so I wont tell you why I think you’re a joke
Cause if wordz were exchanged, I might face someone who’s dope
6/10 - good punch.
weak fuck, there is only one thing animal about your dorky rhymes
If I pointed out all your weak spots, you would resemble a porcupine
7/10 - liked this closer.
39/70

Wordz ah God:
his verse=garbage n even the votes r sloppy
so after this beating
I'll battle ur Soul coz Im tired of stompin nobody.
6/10 - niice opener.
Every post displays ur homosex
He stares @ the closet so hard
The monster in there knows his options r leave home or death.
4.5/10 - decent.
my fist'll go completely through u
I dont acknowledge u at all
N' yeah there's only One Way.. too bad for u its through a fuckin wall.
4.5/10 - decent personal.
U'll never be at my level
Its a peek as high as the gods
While Kris played u for Casino.. n just used ur name to fill a slot.
4/10 - nah.
Fed u to the sharks
I can here ur heart crying out
N' if there's still only One Way.. the female sex'll start dying out.
5.5/10 - decent personal.
U didn't wanna agree
But my Math is pleasin son
I'll be going from point b to a while u'll be goin from me.. to Jon\
6.5/10 - liked this one.
Wishin I'd no show
this kid should be ashaimed
coz Ive watched all ur moves.. After I kicked ur ribs in n u started rollin in pain.
5.5/10 - iight closer.
36.5/80

this was a very good battle i thought ... unlike civil. i thought wordz was alot less played and had some fresh shit in there.. guess bein' an old head I see where he's comin' from. one way had some niice shit in there as well... and a few more stronger punches which got him the win.
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Old 03-01-09, 11:04 AM   #10
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I refuse to take you seriously, you really aint nothing but a wanna be
If you were the wordz ah god, The Passion would have been a comedy
But you’re the first one to call a religious punch used on you lame
You did it last week, But followed it with one glorifying your name
I don’t want drama son, so I wont tell you why I think you’re a joke
Cause if wordz were exchanged, I might face someone who’s dope

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my fist'll go completely through u
I dont acknowledge u at all
N' yeah there's only One Way.. too bad for u its through a fuckin wall.
U didn't wanna agree
But my Math is pleasin son
I'll be going from point b to a while u'll be goin from me.. to Jon

not a bad battle, i think one came more consistent with hitting punches in his verse, and words had that second bar that i think was the best bar of the battle. I dont really understand words structure though, both lines could easily fit on the top part of the bar, and you enter it unnecessarily. anyways oneway had a few more harsh attempts imo.

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Old 03-01-09, 05:22 PM   #11
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You claim this a walk in the park, but here’s what the truth brings
You came on a menstrual cycle and spend most the time on a mood swing
not feeling this
I refuse to take you seriously, you really aint nothing but a wanna be
If you were the wordz ah god, The Passion would have been a comedy
thought this wasnt a good nameplay
But you’re the first one to call a religious punch used on you lame
You did it last week, But followed it with one glorifying your name
ok
If we came face to face you know for sure I’ll be wasting you jerk
I’ll smash your head off your verse just to rub your face in the dirt
this was nothng special
I wanted to throw a punch using name play, involving text and wits
But the only book at your level, was designed for crayons and kids
aight
I don’t want drama son, so I wont tell you why I think you’re a joke
Cause if wordz were exchanged, I might face someone who’s dope
lmfao, nice
weak fuck, there is only one thing animal about your dorky rhymes
If I pointed out all your weak spots, you would resemble a porcupine
lol ok

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his verse=garbage n even the votes r sloppy
so after this beating
I'll battle ur Soul coz Im tired of stompin nobody.
doesn't make sense
Every post displays ur homosex
He stares @ the closet so hard
The monster in there knows his options r leave home or death.
i get what you were trying to do
my fist'll go completely through u
I dont acknowledge u at all
N' yeah there's only One Way.. too bad for u its through a fuckin wall.
ok nameplay
U'll never be at my level
Its a peek as high as the gods
While Kris played u for Casino.. n just used ur name to fill a slot.
lool nah man
Fed u to the sharks
I can here ur heart crying out
N' if there's still only One Way.. the female sex'll start dying out.
didnt work the first time
U didn't wanna agree
But my Math is pleasin son
I'll be going from point b to a while u'll be goin from me.. to Jon
this was ok
Wishin I'd no show
this kid should be ashaimed
coz Ive watched all ur moves.. After I kicked ur ribs in n u started rollin in pain
this was aight

bad battle imo, you both can do better then this, wordz ah god stop with that lame ass style ur using of makin every punch 3 bars long, it looks ugly... anyways you came aight and almost could have won this but those 2 last bars from one way were cool... one way you gotta try harder tho if you wanna keep making it farther in this tourney, your rhyme scheme is cool but work on the harshness of ur punches

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Old 03-02-09, 05:50 PM   #12
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one way wins 1-0

wordz loses and goes to th jump
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