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Old 11-18-06, 12:44 PM   #1
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I Put That Gun To Ya ft Prah'Ject

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I Put That Gun To Ya ft Prah'Ject


Song Order: Zone Out, Prah'Ject, Zone Out
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If you dont like this eat a dick
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 11-18-06, 12:50 PM   #2
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loooool at eating a dick.....yeah this song is crack nigga
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Old 11-18-06, 01:01 PM   #3
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Listening...

Beat is hard. Intro is nice, sample is dope. Talking in the intro goes on for too long, kinda pissin' me off..Ok, here we go. Zone out comes in nice..Quality has really gotten better..Flow is nice, energy could be upped a tad. Also, you might wanna turn up ya vocals a bit, it's kinda hard to understand you with the sample playing in the back. Lyrical wise, it was pretty decent. Some nice multies..The Grudge line was nice..Intermental comes in with nice and strong..Lol at the pop line, nice. Flow is good, I'm feeling your adlibs..Zone out comes back..Lol at the mutant turtle line hahaha nice..Energy alot better than your first verse.

Overall, nice track here. Hit up "Bang With Me" and hook it up with some feed when you get a minute.
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Old 11-18-06, 03:12 PM   #4
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alright i listened to this track yesterday..ayo zone i thought it was to hot for RV..haha

okay apexx productionz..always loved their beats..real nice...intro comes in..a little too long though..like that sample

okay the intro is way long...

zone - i like how you came in..not feelin the sample on the verse..your voice matches this beat real cool..lyrics were cool in this. you upped your game a lot man. quality was cool too.

hook - kinda annoying. cool adlibs

prahject - think you shoulda upped your vocals though..that pop line was cool..didnt get it at first..adlibs are cool on this verse..nothing too spectacular on the lyrics. flow was cool

zone comes back with that turtle line..hahaha...the way you ended was kinda weird though..



overall this is a nice track. nothing that i would listen to personally but its cool for what it is
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Old 11-18-06, 04:14 PM   #5
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Yeah
I dont know why duke made the intro so long
oh well,uppin
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 11-18-06, 04:19 PM   #6
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wtf? zone i just gave u this beat for the collab!
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Old 11-18-06, 04:25 PM   #7
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Man, you wasnt online and I grew very impatient. So I gave it to the first dope nigga I seen. We can still do some shit though
Im tryina make another track tonight
I got the beat already
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 11-18-06, 04:31 PM   #8
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we were still waiting on a 3rd head for the collab as far as i knew, that being dough stackz lol i'm online everyday. annnnnd, im on aim right now too. get on aim
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Old 11-26-06, 06:38 PM   #9
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wow. im suprised yall aint get much feedback on this song. but this shit is hott as hell. the beat was banging . loved the jayz part in the beginning..thats a hott sample. zone your first verse was nice. i just didnt like how low it sounded it coulda been louder but the lines were hittin hard...and prah ..i aint even know you was this good. ya voice is pretty hott on the track and ya presence is nice as hell the lines you came with were dope..and zone came back in and killt it. wowww...loved it...good job
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Old 11-26-06, 06:43 PM   #10
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wow. im suprised yall aint get much feedback on this song. but this shit is hott as hell. the beat was banging . loved the jayz part in the beginning..thats a hott sample. zone your first verse was nice. i just didnt like how low it sounded it coulda been louder but the lines were hittin hard...and prah ..i aint even know you was this good. ya voice is pretty hott on the track and ya presence is nice as hell the lines you came with were dope..and zone came back in and killt it. wowww...loved it...good job

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Old 11-27-06, 02:11 AM   #11
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^^wait?..lol kyrogenix?..u zone out bro?..lol but yeah thanks gully ya diggg..song is hot..jus cats be sleeeping
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Old 11-30-06, 06:06 PM   #12
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Yall talkin real gangsta n shit, idk I don't usually like songs like this but I'm enjoyin it. You have a weird soundin voice but it's coo, your lyrics are def hot and ya flow is deadly. The beat is fuckin hot but the hook is semi annoying lol. Prah comes in hot, I like his pressence. The lyrics are hot as well, I'm feelin your verse a lot prah. Oh word you kinda remind me of J Kwon zone....nice track though im feelin it.

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Old 11-30-06, 06:14 PM   #13
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I've heard the J Kwon thing before
thanks for the feedback
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